Ilena Louise

@devastate-lasting    Once a year, the sun lines up with the Giving Tree, and once a year, under it’s rustling leaves, a miracle happens.  

@gracie-j

Oh my gosh, that’s impressive!!!!!!!!

@gracie-j

I’m thankful for this great writing community, too!!  I’m also thankful for Thanksgiving break, which gives me time to actually write during the school year!!! 😂

@annika-c

That’s awesome!!

Well, I’m in the idea stage right now, still coming up with cool stuff for two different book ideas:  fantasy, and thriller/post-apocalyptical. 😊  The basic premises are a little challenging to come up with now, but I can try:

#1–fantasy:  The cultures in this are based off of the ancient Viking, Roman, Eg…[Read more]

@annika-c

Welcome!!  Your story sounds intriguing. 😃  Wow, 65k words!  Since it’s on it’s fourth draft, do you think it’ll be finished soon?

<p style=”text-align: left;”>@scoutfinch180</p>
I’m on both forums, so I knew that I would do that, haha!! 😁  Yes, I meant KP, but said SE.

1st section:

1)  I like the opening sentence 😉

2)  In the second paragraph, I think it would flow better if you shortened some of the sentences by omitting unnecessary words/details or splitting the sentences into two sentences

3)  “The loud whirring of the distant, useless generator breaking broke the howling of the wind through jagged pea…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Hey!!  I was thinking I could look through each post if you wanted me to and proofread each separately (so I don’t write all the changes in one long post).  Sound good?

@writerlexi1216

Hello!!  Welcome to KP!  I’m Ella and I used to be homeschooled, but now I go to a classical Christian school.  I loooovve cats, working out, basketball, listening to music, and writing thriller/suspense/dystopian books.  My cat is a brindle named Jasmine and she’s super sassy! 😂

I know everyone’s asked you a lot of questions alr…[Read more]

Would your character rather be able to have extreme jumping skills or be able to maneuver every maze?

Isa:  maneuver every maze

Andrew: extreme jumping skills

New question:

Would you rather go on a cruise on the fjords in Norway or go to the Caribbean?

As the cat gazed down at the twinkling little lights, everything went quiet–then the world went black.

Next one:

Ooo, can I join?

Would your character rather give money to a random charity or to their crazy uncle (or whatever relative they have that’s crazy)?

Isa:  random charity

Sawyer:  crazy uncle

My question:

Would your character rather choose all the rooms in their own castle (spa, workout room, etc.), or would they rather all the rooms in the…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Thanks!

As the smoke gathered around their feet, they were gone–all disappeared except him.  

Ooo, can I join?!?!!!

@alia

She stood five feet away from where I was hidden in the shadows, staring at the screen where the greatest secret of humankind was displayed:  Your life is a lie.

Next picture:

@alia

What’s next??   I love it!!!!!!!  It’s not over the top at all.  Great job, I hope there’s more…

@gracie-j, @devastate-lasting, @kathleenramm

Cool beans.   Thanks!!  I like all those characters (Scarlett O’Hara got under my skin tho, haha )

@kathleenramm

Inception, big time.  Sooo good!!  Some of the Dark Phoenix songs are good too.

Hans Zimmer 😆