@hybridlore
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RAE posted an update 2 years, 6 months ago
@grcr @spinner4him @jonas @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @hanako @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @devastate-lasting @power @anyone randomly looking at my profile.
I would like some serious criticizing on this scene. I don’t want to hear anything like “It’s good” I want to hear stuff like, “It needs help here…” “It’s fine here…” I don’t…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
What’s your vote? Chester and Libbie, or Albert and Libbie? I’m not gonna give any spoilers, but I’m curious to hear your thoughts.
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Fernweh_Grace replied to the topic Inktober Snippet Series: House of Nelindar in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry for not posting anything.. life has been crazy, especially this past week. I haven’t been able to finish the Inktober prompt list yet, but I’m getting there. I just added 3 more snippets for you guys.
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Esther replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @hybridlore @acancello
Thank you all so much!! I’ll definitely keep it all in mind. (:
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whaley replied to the topic Character Development Theme List! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Some more… Honestly I’m not sure what the point of this scene is supposed to be, entirely, but here it is anyway lol.
Etta was still absent the next day, and after school, I met George and Chester by the road going further into town.
“You all still want to stop by the post?” Chester asked.
“Of cours…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
Seriously though… sometimes I laugh at the things I have to look up when I’m writing lol.
I usually just think, I hope no one walks in right now and asks me questions. And I wonder what people would think if they knew what I was doing…especially my mom and dad…
😂😂 yeah, the browser history thing is funny sometimes lol<…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
I have been summoned, but no text precceds
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Esther replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 6 months ago
@trailblazer @euodia-vision @hybridlore @acancello @janellebelovedpig
Hey bloggers! 😁
So I’ve actually been seriously considering starting a blog so that I can start building my writing platform as soon as possible. I’ve brainstormed and I think it’s just going to be about writing and books/book reviews. I’m not sure if I’ll start it soon or n…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings posted a new activity comment 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! I usually don’t write that much, but my goal for November is 20k and I don’t want to be writing much on Sundays.
That’s great! My oc Layson has braces 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @smiley @euodia-vision @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @whalekeeper @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-really-(:
Some of my own memes 🤭 (sry if they’re blurry 😬)

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Cloaked Mystery started the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @thearcaneaxiom @rae @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hanako @acancello @hybridlore @anyone
This is a short story I had to write for my creative writing class. I thought I’d share it here as well. I’m not necessarily looking for feedback–I got plenty already–but if you have any thoughts, feel free to share them.
Blade of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @hybridlore
Oh, that’s really too bad 😕 She was planning to restart her AIO roleplay, too.
Joining to outline at :48! It’s okay to skip NaNo. I am going for 30k at best, and even then I have a feeling that won’t happen. But that’s okay. Hope you have a sweet sprint!
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Beth replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 6 months ago
Lol. I’m not overwhelmed, I just take a long time to respond. I did mess the last text up because I forgot to tag the people I was responding to AND I totally responded out of order… Oops.
The Milana Legends… I think is YA, though it is a little confusing at a ton of points because there’s so many different things you have to…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for reading!
lol.. Mmm, I see.
But to be honest, I think the way that these characters talk might just be because of where they are in the social system, so that would make more sense.
Yeah. It kinda has to do with his social class, his education, and the things he reads about and all.
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
It looks awesome!! Thank you so much!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Ok awesome!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
Oooh, I’d love to have you do one for my charries when you have the time!
So it’s not just one… it’s actually two. I want a couple/ship/idk what to call it for Everton and Amidala. (Everdala!)
They kinda have a friends-to-lovers dynamic. And their relationship goes through a lot of ups and downs. Though they still are loyal to each…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 6 months ago
If your not busy, could you make one for my character Paxton Dale? If you go onto Pintrest, under my profile there’s a board called, “My novel” with an insane amount of sections 😀 and a section is called ‘Paxton’ (for reference pictures) I can give you quotes and things if you need them, and if you don’t feel like making one, that’s…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Woops, tags for the above post about Fenninn in the RP…
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @esther-c @rae @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @hanako @hybridlore @jonas @anyone else I’m missing
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I think the second part flows pretty well!
This paragraph, “Something impacted Nahim’s armor about six inches above where his plate ended at the bottom of the rib cage. There was a boom and a flash from the object. Nahim drew his gun and aimed into the fog. His helmet searched for some signature from the person who had shot at him, but it could d…[Read more]
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