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@fernweh_grace

Oh, okay! Really? I love mountains too XD I’ll have to google that range, but I did see pictures of Lesotho and it looked really pretty! Is it very remote where you live?

Ooh, okay, awesome! It sounds pretty cool, I would love to hear about the plot if you want to share it! Is it fantasy?

I loved the wingfeather saga, narnia, and…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

If your readers love the characters enough, I think even with a slower plot, the story will still work! But yeah, I see what you mean.

So, you say that you don’t know what’s going to happen… that makes me wonder, is the sequel absolutely necessary? Like, for the character’s arcs, and everything, or was the story really…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Of course!
@janelle-beloved-pig

Aww, those are so sweet!

@freedomwriter76

Awesome XD I’ll definitely be on here.

@fernweh_grace

Hi Kathyrn, welcome to Kingdom Pen!

I’m hybridlore, or Hybrid, a Christian homeschooled teenager, violinist, and writer. I mostly write science fiction or dystopian ideas, and I love Andrew Peterson and instrumental music as well!

That’s awesome! How long have you lived in Africa? I really like geography and learning other…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I don’t think it’s too summary-y, lol. It fits the style so far very well! I would’ve maybe liked to see the scene with Libbie hanging out with Sara, Lillian, and Etta in a non-summary kind of style, but if they’re not major characters, I think this works best. Great job so far, I’m really enjoying it! 😁

@trailblazer

Looks good! 😁 aw, poor Albert!

@freedomwriter76

I’ll be praying too! I hope both y’all’s dads find new jobs soon.

@light-warrior-pen

I wanna say watch proposal videos but search results for that might be a little weird, idk lol. I would say try to make it specific to the characters –if you can, maybe give them an inside joke or something like that, or maybe one of them quotes something the other said earlier, if that makes sense. I love scenes like that 😊

@mineralizedwritings

Praying for you and hoping you heal and get better soon!

@janellebelovedpig

That sounds actually pretty cool, lol. I should probably try that sometime…

I usually write on the back porch, which is sort of like my office, lol. My family comes out there too (especially my sister) but I spend the most time there, especially now that the weather’s cooling down for us. I’m not sure if I’ve noticed a…[Read more]

@smiley

Yess girl I love fall so much! Thanks for the list, maybe I’ll try to actually write one for this month xD

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks! 😁

@freedomwriter76

YESs that’s AWESOME girl!!! I can’t wait to see it published someday… and of course read it XD

@trailblazer

Looks good! Didn’t really notice anything to fix.

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, it’s not working for me either.

@trailblazer

I have read the first two! Haven’t been able to get the next ones, though. BUT I do know that @kyronthearcanin likes them!

@trailblazer

I really like it so far! I don’t have much feedback, but I would love to read whatever comes next!