Jean Coul

@elfwing Nice! I love the thought you’ve put into this!

@godlyfantasy12 You’re looking at a person who worldbuilds as she writes. On the other hand, for maps I usually just draw them by hand. So I’m afraid I can’t be of much help, ahhh….

@joy-caroline Mm….years ago, when I first started writing, I got a story idea. But it was on the deeper side, so I decided to let it sit and wait, and only just started writing it now. And I’m glad that I let it wait, even though I had really wanted to start it back then. So in the same way, I suggest you let this story idea sit and wait until…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

I’m a little late to this, but I think this is the last sentence I wrote:

Evie sighed louder than necessary. “Remind me why I’m here again…”

You said without context, didn’t you? XD

Oh my goodness, everybody has such amazing lines! We should all post our ‘last lines’ here at the end of every writing day:)

@elanor Ik this is late, but thanks! XD

@godlyfantasy12 Ah, I wish I was a help here but I have the EXACT SAME PROBLEM XDDD Anyways, I’ll definitely look at that site… I’ll be coming back here to see what y’alls think.. if you guys make any progress on mapmaking and whatever, please tag me 🙂

Whoops, the sentence “There’s the paragraph” looks like it’s part of the story! It’s not, sorry.

When a creature had been killed, their file is marked “Deceased” and put in a file by itself. But if someone were a prisoner of war or for a severe crime, the file was marked “incarcerated for extreme offense” and left where it was.

That was the label on Hunter’s file. [I spent quite a while trying to think of a last name for him–and Torrent, by…[Read more]

He was alive.

So……Yeah. This sentence really needs context. Basically, in my WIP, the main character just found out her father was alive when no one thought he was. I almost included the whole paragraph but then remembered that it had to be one sentence. Actually, I’ll show you the paragraph. Let me know what you think of it.

@godlyfantasy12

Oh no! Maps! Haha I am definitely not the best at making maps. What I usually do is draw them on a whiteboard, then take a picture of that rough drawing, then do my best to actually stay true to what I have drawn (since I sometimes switch locations around, so it gets difficult to just stick with one basic landmass until I’ve…[Read more]

@abigail-m

Haha, well, I certainly had to read it very slowly because it was hard to wrap my head around XD Honestly, it makes me even more curious about this novel now, and you’ve possibly just persuaded me to buy it this summer 😉 Aww, you have a dog??? *melts* Sorry, but I just think dogs are SO cute!! What’s his name? 😀 Oh, me too! I’m defin…[Read more]

@Kathleenramm

Of course:)

@elfwing Those sound awesome! Do you have a favorite?

@anika123

I’ll have to check it out then!:)

@elfwing

Yikes, my reply disappeared, (warning, that happens from time to time on KP), let me know if you didn’t get it though and I can work on a re-post:)

@beth-darlene

I love side characters too, so much that they often become MCs XD (Seriously my current WIP actually has five of them).
And I agree, an outdoor fantasy is an awesome setting:D

@elfwing

Elfwing it is! Besides, that’s a super cool title:D
Ooh, really? That’s really interesting how you included griffins 😀 *Also looks around suspiciously* XD Well it used to be, but I have a hard time not talking about it and by now I have spilled all the spoilers on KP at some point XD So yeah anyway:) Entitled, The Snow Warrior, it’s not…[Read more]

@beth-darlene

Hi Beth! I know I’m a little late on welcoming, but…. Welcome to Kingdom Pen! 😀
Okay, so here are my two questions I like to ask all new KeePers, (but of course you can just ignore them too if you want:) 1# What is your favorite character type, and 2# what is your favorite setting to write in?
Anywho, Welcome and it’s amazing to…[Read more]

@anika123

Hello Anika! I am a little late in welcoming you to Kingdom Pen, but anyway… welcome! 😀 I’m Abigail btw:) A middle-grade fantasy novel? That sounds awesome!
Once again, welcome and it’s amazing to have you here at KP!:D