Jean Coul

@typewriter77 Well, I’m afraid that I’m the type of person who doesn’t know what their own theme is until someone explicitly tells them. I’m that clueless and unprepared, usually. And to me, usually in good literature themes are hard to pick out clearly, but you can feel that it’s there.

I think that each scene and character could show a facet of…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Whoever was the villain of Shrek.

I haven’t watched it yet though but I’m sure he is preeetty epic.

@typewriter77

EPIC.

Now tell me your deepest darkest secret. (then I’ll tell you mine) 😉

@gracie-j

Unfortunately, yes (I went to edit because of a grammar error and then it vanished). Oh, that would be wonderful, thank you! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

It seems like the forum is eating my reply… If you didn’t get my post, let me know and I’ll re-post it. 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Girl, I totally understand feeling stuck about this, and might I say, @gracie-j, I’m honored that you tagged me! 🙂 Okay, so first of all, this elements sound very hooking and I know it can be a struggle with introducing new worlds/characters in a flash. Seriously, my novel is chock-full of this.

*rubs hands together* First t…[Read more]

@relia GREETINGS, FELLOW WEIRDO!!! >:3 My name’s Grace, but you can call me Kads if you want! (It’s short for one of my aliases, Kadotake, but my friends on here shortened it to Kads XD) I’ve read a few of the posts on here… and… FELLOW CANADIAN!!! I think there’s literally only one other person on the forum (that i know of anyways) who lives…[Read more]

@relia

you sound exactly like my friend Annalise and my sis, lol! (who both do creepy gollum voices😆) i love it!!!!  if ur psycho, then so are my sister and Annalise (and they aren’t because they’re reaaaalllly smart hahaha).

anyways, nice to meet you, i’m ella.  i write dystopian, thriller/suspense, murder mystery, and paranormal fantasy (not e…[Read more]

@faith-q Of course! I’m glad I was able to help 🙂

@gracie-j Haha no worries! And yes! I learn a lot from movies, so a lot of my tips have to do with watching them (also it’s fun to dive back into old favorite films…)

@faith-q Thanks for tagging me and so sorry I missed your sprint! I’m glad you finished your chapter!

@faith-q

Of course:) Thank you also!:D

@faith-q

Hi Faith! I’d love to join (I need some accountability for a project too:)

@godlyfantasy12 Sounds like Lyn really wants to be their friend. If I were her then I would want to tell them a bit about myself and maybe show them around if they have any questions. Probably the smoothest way to info-dump.

@daisy-torres Mood, mood. At least you wrote something!

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh, I totally feel this struggle. It does get more difficult to handle characters transitioning to a new world when there is more than one of them, as well. It isn’t impossible, it just gets more challenging.

It sounds like the characters are waking up to a day where there may not be much else to do aside from introduce them t…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 Wow! I loved this poem, you did such a great job with it. I was also surprised to hear that you don’t write poetry–this is really good!

Now, this is coming from an amateur in poetry, so disregard my comments if they don’t apply:

I noticed that there is no exclamation point in the second “Evil queen! Evil queen!” section here (I…[Read more]

@daisy-torres Gonna stop at :23 for dinner with 10.5 pages. Maybe 2625 words?

Have fun!

@godlyfantasy12

You did an ASTOUNDING job with this poem, girl! Every line flowed so smoothly, the rhythm was very well-written, the parallels at the end were just, *chef’s kiss* brilliant, and overall I think you did a fantastic job! I have to say that the ending is my favorite part, and the shift in tenses wasn’t problematic at all. Great job!…[Read more]

@daisy-torres I’ll be handwriting for some time! Trying to get as much as I can done…might check back around :00 or so.

@godlyfantasy12

Of course! I’m glad I was able to help. You honestly don’t write poetry? I thought that that was excellent 😀 It was so much fun to read and interesting and yes, I just loved it!

YES!! That is amazing! Much better on the length and it fades the poem out more naturally, I think that’s sensational:)