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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @freedomwriter @keilah-h @wilder-w
Oh! I was just thinking about what my charries would do at lunch! Y’all are awesome.
By the way, I feel kinda like I need to put on a content warning. Nothing is really stated, but some pretty nasty things are aludes to, including addiction, abuse, profanity, and immorality.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey, should we transport Luna’s group to after class?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I don’t know exactly whom, but I was thinking either Adolphus and Dietrich, or another set of henchmen.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 we’re still on the road headed home, so we listened online. It was very good, about how praise heals, and trials grow patience ect. (From James and Romans). @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Oh Hitchens has no idea how close he came to one of those brothers hunting him down.
And um…so the poetic justice of using one of the…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Let’s see…
Viktor
As soon as the man walked up, Viktor heard Reúven’s voice in a low mutter.
“What fine boots. Very much the officer.”
Viktor’s eyes went wide. He spread his feet and gripped his sword, ready. Esen shifted on his shoulders to raise her crest in answer to his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
AWWWW….
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Inglor
“Whoop-de-doo? That’s a phrase I’ve never heard before.” Mirth danced in his leaf green eyes. “But then, I’ve never been around many other peoples before.”
Almarrin
Psychology was such an interesting thing, especially when it could be studied through observation. From his vantage point behind a door he could hear one…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Okay y’all!
Zlatan
The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.
Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.
There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Inglor
What did elves smell like?
He shook his head and turned back to Luna.
“I look young because I am young. Fifty years of my life are like fifteen of others. You see,” he sighed, wondering how to explain. “I am an Alve, one of the fair folk, child of the morning star.”
She still looked a bit confused, but he hoped un…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Campfire Write (and other writing resources) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@loopylin @folith-feolin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
I’ve got two more! Both, however, are paid, so they’re probably best only if you’re really serious. I haven’t actually used either of these, I just like to share them with my fellow writers in case they want to try it for the extra help.
The first is One Stop For Writers. It has a…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I hope you don’t mind me putting them in the same class, but I had another scene idea…
Inglor
Nyx wanted to skip class, that much was clear. He frowned slightly and traced the leaf on his shirt collar. “Geometry? I have that also.” He glanced at Almarrin.
“Psychology of aggression.” The grey eyes were smiling.
“Ai! Well…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Viktor
“Ah, thanks anyway! I’ll find him after class.”
Concern flooded through him, filling his eyes and face. He leaned forward and touched the back of her seat.
“Is this a… brother?”
She sighed. “My little brother.”
“When did he disappear? Is this like him?”
Grimm gave a low, sympathetic laugh and Jocelyn huffed. “He s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
Ok!
Reúven & others
Well, here they were. Literature right off the top. Reúven pulled a chair out for Liora and he and Viktor sat down on either side.
The teacher had stepped out to talk with another teacher in the hall, letting the students settle in before class started. She wa…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
The elf smiled. “Êl síla erin lû e-govaned vîn, Dolunay, Nyx. I am Inglor Avelorion, and this is my friend Almarrin Woden.”
Almarrin bowed, but his attention was moving on. “Classes, Inglor.”
“Brother,” Inglor clamped a hand on his arm. “Are these your manners?”
“I bowe…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @felicity @madelyn @theloonyone @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper
Here is another scene I wrote. This is after Christopher and Briana have been captured and have escaped. Christopher was fighting off a guard and told Briana to run. They just met again.
“I see you’re angry at me for doing what you told me…
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Arien started the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, I said I’d post something from my last book, A Dream Come True, so here is the pitch and the first chapter!
First, the pitch:
Elinor and her twin brother Aedan were supposed to be like children to the Dickinsons. Instead, the Dickinsons treat them more like slaves. When Aedan learns that the Dickinsons are planning to sell them as servants…
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yes, the Alven have pointed ears, but they’re regular size. (Luna is adorable)
Inglor
Most of the students here walked in shadow as if fear itself lurked in the corners. They also gave Almarrin and him a wide berth. He frowned, the dance in his step diminishing.
Then a smile, one bright,…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Ideas on a scene? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 10 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @felicity @koshka @theloonyone @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
So it seems like a lot of you said the same things, and I realized that just this scene alone doesn’t make much sense lol 🙂 So I’ll try to explain a little more.
This is basically the climax of Christopher and Briana’s relationship. So it’s…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
Actually, I don’t know. XD
Lyn and Grimm might be fun, since they haven’t really run into each other very much in the other RP.
And Lynn may have some fun.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
@keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76 @koshka @wilder-w
The poor baby!
Also, I have an idea for a scene for later after Alwin has met some more charries in which he gets knocked over and… his backpack falls open.
But for now…
Alwin
An annoying buzz sounded overhead, calling Alwin’s attention to his slow feet. He sped up, his worn t…[Read more]
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