GodlyFantasy12

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@the_lost-journal

How did they go?

@savannah_grace2009 How are you doing?

@grcr

Wow that looks so amazing!

The shading reminds me a lot of Chinese/Douyin art style which is something I’ve been trying to replicate since I started watching Donghua. It looks amazing!

@savannah_grace2009

Aahh, okay. My theory was in vain!

@grcr

I want to know where the boy’s shirt comes from, it’s quite amusing to me. 🙂

A walking echo becomes friends with a kid who is generationally traumatized by suitcases and green haired women.

A new god learns what office life is like, falls in love with a Volkswagen bus, and spirals in the complexities of self fulfillment.

A woman afraid of Picasso-style art teams up with a boy to figure out why his face is so flat,…[Read more]

I like y’all’s, they’re pleasantly confusing and intriguing. XD

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was interesting! The beginning was slightly confusing, because I couldn’t figure out how Cedrick was narrating. But it has a very intriguing premise!

Isaiah seems… questionable, like you said. I would like to see Hana meet him.

If you add to it, please tag me!

@loopylin

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Hi, Marcel! Are you excited to be interviewed?

[Puts his elbows on his knees, foot bouncing. Looks reasonably focused.] “Hi, nice to meet you. Is this like a job interview?”

How old are you?

“I got somebody to run all my physicals and I should be fourteen or fifteen. But there are strange things out there, things that should be in my…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Praying!!

@loopylin

I love how both of those sentences are probably super accurate. Now I want to know why Fel wants to get rid of the robots.

@loopylin

Hehe, let me do it for you. *Boops him* *He doesn’t react* :]

This is a weird question to ask, but does anybody want to interview Marcel? I’m feeling icky and can’t think straight enough for the roleplays. I don’t know, just want something cheerful to do. @loopylin @rae @godlyfantasy12 @savannah_grace2009

@ellette-giselle

I think I should be able to, but if I end up needing a longer break, I can probably just catch up after that. I’m a pretty fast reader. 🙃

@hybridlore

That would be lovely, if you please

@whalekeeper

Yay!!

Would you like me to add you to the Part 2 doc?