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@godlyfantasy12

Congrats!!

Well, I’m still trying to balance two writing projects, as well as alpha-reading for Kayleigh.  My entire grade at my school got sent home because of a COVID case, so I have plenty of time on my hands now, lol!!  I’m not very far into either of my WIPs (about two chapters each), but since I have the time, I’ll p…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216

I love this sooo much!!!  Great job, Lexi!!! 🎉  To answer your questions,

1)  I really like Caira’s character, especially her internal monologue!!

2)  Yes, I would!!!  I really love the idea of the “Prodigy” and Deek… I mean, what else is there to say?

3)  I think the pacing is great!!

Great job!!!!! 💛

@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]

@scripter-of-kingdoms

Not to interrupt this conversation, but that’s so neat!! I should try doing a persona sometime… You’ve SO inspired me to start drawing, girl!!!! <3333333 Also I love your new tagline XD

@Gracie-j

Those are great names!! I didn’t even make the connection that Catherina was Rina’s full name!! *slaps palm to forehead* By the way, when you were listing off those names, you reminded me that I very nearly named Deek ‘Maverick’. That was his name in the early drafts XD

@devastate-lasting

I know!! Sometimes I just shake at my head at…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

OH MY WORD, Daisy!!!!!! Thank you for this!!!!!! I’m so happy I HAVE FAN ART!! Woohoo!!!! I really like it, and you totally got her dress perfect!! Thank you!! 🙂

@Gracie-j

Whoa, girl!! You have some amazing dialogue in your story!! You totally sound like a pro writer!! (Do you have any tips on how you do it??)

@joy-caroline

Awww, those quotes are so sweet! I especially love the one where Temira is talking to Paul! Those are some great lines of dialogue!!! <333333 *tries not to cry*

@godlyfantasy12

Oh…[Read more]

@e-k-seaver

Sounds great! I’ll give you the feedback ASAP:)
(I give everybody this warning: I’m a pretty slow reader:)

@godlyfantasy12

THANK YOU, GIRL!! I love your characters’ names as well!! I don’t know if I’ve told you, but I ADORE the name Jocelyn!!! 🙂

THE NICKNAMES, YES!! I love giving my characters nicknames even though I know they’d hate it (anyone else do this? XD) Like, occasionally I’ll refer to Newton as ‘Newt’ even though I know he would hate that…[Read more]

@Gracie-j

Thanks, Gracie!! 🙂 I deeply appreciate it!!

@wyn-rose

Aww, thanks for offering to read it, girl!! And there’s no rush at all!! I think I posted a link to the first chapter here, but if not, tell me and I’ll send it again 🙂

@hallie-jean

YESSS!! What a coincidence!! 😀 I’m not sure if I’ve ever seen an ‘Alexa’ in a fictional book EVER, so that’s neat you’re writing about one!! LOL!!

Yeah, I’m the same way, to an extent. I wouldn’t mind naming my future son Derrick or my future daughters Felicity (that’s the MC to another WIP that I haven’t talked about XD), Alana,…[Read more]

@Gracie-j

Yes!! Me too!! (Although I probably shouldn’t name my daughter Caira XD) Newton would’ve been such a great name for a son… *sigh* Alas.

I relate 10/10! I think of my charries as my babies, no matter the age. I want nothing bad to happen to them… until I think up more ways to make their lives miserable XD My family probably thinks…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

That is an excellent idea! I’m going to have to get the printer operational and do that. Thanks you:D

@godlyfantasy12

That’s alright, the post showed up in my notifications bar:)
Congrats on your word count! You can totally make the 30,000 milestone tomorrow! New lights sound super cool too *sigh* I really don’t have a single place to hang up my character aesthetics… but if I did, I’d be going nuts hanging them up everywhere XD

As for my WIP,…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Yikes, this happens to me, too! Maybe go to the Activity section in your profile, copy and paste your post, and try re-posting? I’m sorry! 🙁

(Okay, maybe that belonged in the meme topic:)