@felicity
Active 9 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Power replied to the topic I Have Returned in the forum Announcements 3 years, 2 months ago
Um, not really. . . I think. Generally, I don’t know how my poem is going to end. I start with an idea or a couple of words/lines that I think are cool, then I just embellish and add stuff. Sometimes it flows. Sometimes it doesn’t.
I have a pretty good sense of rhythm (A blessing and a curse), and I have noticed that my poetry seems to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 (those are all of you who are still on right?
Liberty
Star was smirking. Liberty looked down into the cup and immediately regretted drinking from it.
A flurry of rather foul language came from behind her, only solidifying her suspicions.
“Star…..”…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
Jonathan… XD
Oooh, ok! I’ll have my charries answer number 1.
What would you do if you found a $100 bill?
Ami: …Ev: …
Finally,
Ev: What’s a dollar bill?
Ami: *shrugs* Maybe it’s a type of currency…
Me: One Aletheian drek is equal to two American dollars.
Ev: Oh, ok. So 100 dollars is 50 dreks! Sweet! After exchang…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
Wow. That was super fun/scary to read! Is there a second book? I mean, there’s got to be more! 🙂
I’m glad you enjoyed it!! There is of course more!! 😀 As of now, it is only existent in my head though… XD When I start writing, I’ll post it!
I really like how you described the aunt and uncle. I could totally picture the cottage.
Yay!! ᾗ…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 2 months ago
@mineralizewritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @gwyndalf-the-wise @lightoverdarkness6
Here are the last three chapters!!! (Sorry it took me so long. I kept forgetting. XD) It’s pretty fast-paced, in my opinion. So don’t mind that. I may fix it in the second draft.
I do not have a chapter of Asher and Ev’s conversation. It may be in the secon…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @sarafini @felicity @mineralizedwritings @loopyli @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper
Sorry, y’all! I don’t think I can keep up with this RP as well. 🙁 Hope y’all have fun!! 😀
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Dante
“Potions?” Dante asked, slipping a couple vials out of Sebastian’s pocket while his back was turned. He leaned against the counter next to Bullet and examined them. One was a thick, bubbling orange liquid with the label “fire breath”. Dante immediately pocketed this one and then read the other. It was labeled “…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper ok, have fun! @loopylin
Bullet
“Have you ladies seen any chocolate, perchance? I’m starved.” came the voice of the other creature they’d met. (didn’t remember if he was human or something else.)
“Chocolate?” Bullet perked up. That sounded delicious.
Star grabbed the tray and held it like a waiter at a restaurant might. “Let’…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @felicity @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6
Ok! I’m back!
Someone said something about a potion cabinet? I know some hilarious havoc Star could wreak with that.
(BTW whoever asked what my charries’ names are, they are Liberty, Rivet, Bullet, Feather and Star.)
Feather
Star kept…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @felicity @freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @euodia-vision
Another question for y’all’s charries!! (If I accidentally forgot to tag you, sorry. And if I tagged you and you aren’t participating, sorry, as well. XD 🙂 )
If you were stranded on an island, what ONE person would you want to be st…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Beta-readers?? in the forum Publishing & Platform 3 years, 2 months ago
@power @otherworldlyhistorian @sarafini @foltih-feolin @felicity @mineralizedwritings
Thanks for offering, though I’m not looking for beta-readers quite yet. 😉 Your enthusiasm is encouraging, though, and I’ll remember y’all when I’m searching for beta-readers. 🙂
I watched Abbie Emmons’s video on beta readers and she recommend…
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Orielle2023 replied to the topic Fan Fic Middle Earth Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @devastate-lasting @gold_hummingbird @charityanne @gwyndalf-the-wise @c-j @sarafini @madelyn @arien @mineralizedwritings @koshka @lewilliams @princesachronicle22 @folith-feolin @power @otherworldlyhistorian @not-so-…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @loopylin @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @felicity @freedomwriter76 @anyoneelse
Okay! After several failed attempts, I’m
finallygoing to RP!!Dylan
I stood in a room full of soft pastel light and colors. The floor was a light chocolate color. Well, the part that you could see anyway.
Most of it was full of soft, fluffy…[Read more]
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soleilnaia replied to the topic They all said to start here… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
LOL right? A girl can always dream XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
You do? O.O *feels warm and fuzzy* Unfortunately, no, I didn’t make it up. It’s actually Old English.
I like your greeting phrase too!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @esther-c @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @felicity @sarafina @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
SO I’m thinking the girls discover that the girls wardrobe goes straight into the girls room and decides to go tell the others this. That way any other girls can change if they want to when we split.
Same for the guys (…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic THE CRAZY SLEEPOVER WHATEVER WE WANT RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
November
After gathering a heap of snacks, the two boys placed them all on one end of the extremely large table.
“Good job guys.”
“Yea…thanks for your help.” Ev glared at the kit, who hadn’t lifted a finger. He glared back, and then, picking up a single back of chips with his teeth, plopped it into the pile.
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Gwyndalf the Wise replied to the topic I Have Returned in the forum Announcements 3 years, 2 months ago
@not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Imma go ahead and warn you now that I’m fairly liable to misunderstand you. 😅
The reason for all of this ravenous inner turmoil, was because of the absence of THE greatest figure in all of Kingdom Pen history. Nor shall there ever be a figure as great ever again.
That person…. is yours truly.
Eh…I think God is t…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I Have Returned in the forum Announcements 3 years, 2 months ago
@felicity @not-so-secret-secret-assassin
Tis not wise to let just anyone claim the throne of Kingdom Pen without making him prove his worth.
HEAR YE, HEAR YE!
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