Felicity

@esther-c @acancello @freedomwriter76 @trailblazor @grcr @savannah_grace2009

Kaine shudders, crossing his arms over his dark green sweater vest. A stiff breeze edges through the tight weave of his shirt, pushing the rain to his skin. Running a cold clammy hand through his hair, Kaine turns around to see over the crest of the hill.

I’m g…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hmm, so my worldbuilding is pretty solid, and very real for me, because I literally have places based off of real things. For example, I have an underground trade city in the Nevari Desert that is directly based off of Derinkuyu, Cappadocia. I have a whole tribe that has ties to the Basotho, geographically, and culturally, and I…

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@freedomwriter76

I totally understand your concern.

I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr

Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!

(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)

(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Lol didn’t we one time have a wip rant chat… but it got buried in the forums and eventually replaced by the chat chat? XD

I’ll be on next time I have something to share!

Hi! Just letting you guys know that I wont be on today, its my brothers 13 birthday and were having his party also! I cant believe how fast hes growing up (I know I sound like a mom, lol, but seriously, that’s how I feel😂) So I am really busy today, (I’m also going to ask him to join KP, since he always wants to write, but cant get motivated)…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(You just made me think, and now I feel old. I’ve been around a lot longer than most of the people regularly on here nowadays. XD)

Are you talking about before Riker turns himself in, or the end of the series?

In the former case, I’d like to ask if Riker would even go to Leon? He’s already asked for forgiveness time and again.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Hello! Welcome to KP!

I’m the Arcane Axiom, I love math, searching for divine fundamental truth, and exploring that in my writing. I read/write sci-fi/fantasy and am currently working on a universe with my sister called the Septrum.

Questions!

Do you lean towards hard or soft worldbuilding? (Hard meaning concrete rules for the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

 

It’s Felix, The Bois’ Dad, and Felix’s younger brother (and main villain of Leon/Riker’s first Novel) Hans. Yes…that Hans 😬

But they used to be so different 😭

;(

 

Legit, the main quote/moment of their book is this (the probably ending…so sad 😭):

“We fought the war, brother.”

Hans looked out at all the carnage…all the…

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@freedomwriter76

Yw!!

(Yesss, Yori Nakajima!!!!! 😭😭 i’m so sad how it ended between him and Bucky, ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh *faints*)

Wait… how did it end?? Ik Bucky told him what happened and he did it, was there something else?

Oh Riker… so sad. Actually Kaine does a similar thing… he sleeps in trees sometimes XD And one time he slept w…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Thank you for sharing all of those, they are so sweet!💗

@fernweh_grace

Welcome Kathryn! I’m Acancello, also known as Allison! I’m homeschooled and  I love guinea pigs, dogs, traveling, acting, trying weird food (whats the craziest you have tried?), writing, reading, talking and a lot more 😁! I write Dystopian and post-apocalyptic books. I’m so glad you could come to Kingdom Pen!  OK, now I’ll as…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

This will be fun!😏 😂

@whalekeeper

Awww, I love thisss!! 🥰

Oh yesss, I really need to get back into this!!

@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009

😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅

@Freedomwriter76

You’re sooo welcome girl!!! 💗💗

And LIGHT, OH MY GOSHHHHH, THAT MADE ME SMILE SO MUCH THIS MORNING!!!! TELL YOUR LITTLE BROTHER THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

AWWWW I’M SO GLAD!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I did and showed him your post and he smiled and said to tell you you’re welcome 🥰🥰

And girlll…ugh that mood board…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

It’s so weird knowing I’m in a phase but unable to leave it, you know?

You’ll leave it eventually. Like I said. ENJOY IT WHILE IT LASTS!!  😁😁😁 Lol

Yeah you ArE WeiRd MiN, who likes being a moody teenager?? 😂 Okay, it’s not bad, just challenging.

YeAh WeLl I LIkE It

DeAl WiTh It

YUP XDXD

Okay okay okay although, in all fairne…

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@freedomwriter76

Ah ok… so it’s like you have most of the emotional story beats but not the physical ones– like the actual things that are happening?

Ok idk why, but just reading what you wrote (I’ve been in such a rainy mood lately, like all my art seems to have umbrellas ect in it lol) I imagine like Leon or Riker sitting in a coffee shop…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I love that one! It captures her personality really well. Mine never turn out that good, lol!