Felicity

@smiley

Yeah they did a good job of him seeming human. If vision looked straight up robot I think we’d all be going 🤮🤮🤮 about the romance XD

Also he is really sweet, and you can tell he cares about wanda.

@lydia-s

Awww, I love it! You should definitively keep it, its so sweet!

@savannah_grace2009

I love it! Poor Sef, at least she has Lilitu. 🙂

@freedomwriter76

I totally get wanda and vision seeming a little odd. I think because he is played by a real person, it doesn’t freak me out. They actually have to add the uncanny valley affect in post to make him look less human. But story wise, yeah I would never write something like that, I get it.

LOL it’s Bucky eating a plum! XD

He…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

k I just read the ship list…

Woah there…

XD I could never see Steve with Wanda 🤣😂😂

You do you girl XD I mean Ig it could be cute, I’ve just seen so many scenes with her and vision my brain just says NO

Bucky and Yelena is really interesting because she’s got such a strong personality, Bucky seems to have a softer…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

LOl you’ve changed your pfp twice in a single day??

Is that Nat?

@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

I’m doing alright, thanks for asking! <3 I’m quite bored, my parents were gone most of the day so I drew and wrote, not much else. I get too make my birthday cake soon though! We always do our own cakes because I’m gluten free. My mom is about to leave on a 4ish day trip so I’m going to be mega bored this weekend…[Read more]

@light-warrior-pen

Thank you so much💗 That made my day!

@freedomwriter76

I WANT MORE XDXD

jkjk but that was so sweeeet! I was smiling so much while reading that, it was just perfect!

Puuuuurrfect?

Oh, and since you have the characters and plot figured out (How did I not see that??🤣) Just make sure Its to to elaborate and complicated and you add lots of details and description!

@whalekeeper Ok! But she’ll definitely notice him. She’s small enough to fit on a man’s shoulder, so she shouldn’t frighten him if she comes over, right?

Skyraptor

A small hoofed creature (didn’t catch what Gus was, sorry) came to the stream also.

The sense of fear blasted into Skyraptor’s head like wind. He was afraid, and for good reason. The…[Read more]

Seb stares back. “If your sanity is dead, talk about the weather. Now, please, answer my question.”

Clement furrows his brow, still confused by the baffleing child.

“I’ll answer the question… but not because you told me to.”

“I’m a releasor from the freedom bunker coalition…” He pauses, trying to decern how much to tell. “I’m a bit of a pri…[Read more]

@smiley cool! How does he fly? is it like hovering/walking on the air Minecraft style, is it like Superman type, or does he actually have some kind of wings/specialized gliding area on his body?

@esther-c

How fun! I have written a ton of plays when I lived in a neighborhood with a lot of kids even one about the board game “Clue.” I still write some now to preform when I see them all again, my longest being around 17 pages. I can try to help you out, 🙂 I think some good tips would to have everyone have around equal lines, if they want.…[Read more]

@smiley @mineralizedwritings you’re welcome!

@acancello you’re welcome!!

@freedomwriter76 almost tagging a person as a character has happened to me so many times lol.

oh, and cool, I’d love a scene!

@grcr you mind if Skyraptor meets your charrie? if you don’t want to just say he didn’t notice her.

Skyraptor

Faint thoughts led her down the river. Surely there was life here besides her.

Sentient minds, be they animal, human, or alien, were different than those of mere beasts…. This thought she was tracing was that of a being who could talk…[Read more]

@smiley My dad’s cousin uses it too and says making multiple layers for shading and highlights is a good idea.

@freedomwriter76 ahhh so that’s why Franz hates Riker!!

Poor both of them……

also this is completely random but maybe don’t let Riker mention his deceased brother’s name anywhere around Crosshair.

“Nolan” was the name of one of the Imperial officers who mistreated him severely, so…..