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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
tho I am a tad confused what u meant by losing a line at the end??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
Whoa….
Ok so I honestly….don’t rlly get any of that but when you said everything evened out except a few things actual technical poem wise, I’m like….
What…? I…didn’t even try honestly but that makes me so happy! THANK YOU SO MUCH BECAUSE NOW I’M GOING TO GO AND MAKE IT PURPOSEFULLY RIGHT 😂 cuz it pretty much already is!
ahhh…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Some questions about characters in the forum Characters 4 years, 7 months ago
1. Plenty.
2. For any of them probably just number 4.
3. Worst, like, most evil or worst written? I feel like I’ve read/watched a lot of awful villains, but I can’t really think off the top of my head the most evil.
4. A lot, haha, but then I warp them enough that no one can recognise them.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
So to answer some questions it is in paragraph form in the book. The way it posted is pretty much how it is in the draft as of rn.
It is for the Cirque book!
Spotlight and clown are in there because it is in the Cirque book. Hope that sheds some light!
I’m not rlly sure about meters or stanzas or anything. I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Poem For My Book Draft! in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 7 months ago
OK SO! I know where I’m posting this might be A BIT WEIRD BUT HEAR ME OUT!!!!
So as of rn my second book in fantasy series, (the second book is Project DM) has a looong poem in it. I have just gone back and revised the poem and when I finished I was kinda blown away ngl, and I really like it so I wanted to share it with y’all! So this is kinda a…[Read more]
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic My Website is Up and Functional! in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
@trahia-the-minstrel Ahh girl that’s SO exciting!! Congratulations! The site looks great, it seems like you’ve put a lot of work into making it so nice. I’ll definitely be signing up for your newsletter! I’m so excited to hear more about all your artistic work!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Now let me be clear…model the sacrifice, not the mistakes!! Lol! Janner is not Christ, nor a mirror for Christ.
Christ was our sacrifice, and then He called us to sacrifice for others, to show them His love as He showed it to us. That’s what Janner did, allowed the Maker to use him to show the Maker’s love.
just wanted to be clear I was n…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Author Conservatory in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 7 months ago
Umm…this may be reaaaaaaal weird…maybe I’m just living under a rock but….
What in da world is the Author Conservatory? If ya don’t mind ma asking? Never heard of it!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Another thing that helped me was realizing that Christ was my Janner (minus the sins, selfishness and all of Janner’s mistakes)
Christ gave himself, to undo my brokenness, just as Janner had to undo Kalmar’s and all of the other people’s.
And I want to be a Janner for someone else. Does that make sense? It hurts, but there’s beauty in it.
Ch…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I’m more at peace today, my mom helped me because she read it. There was beauty in it. It couldn’t be Kalmar, it wouldn’t work. Janner had to grow in order to Sacrifice.
he was selfish throughout the series and he realized that. In realizing it, he was able to succumb to the Maker’s will, and be the Seed that was willing to be p…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
I finished the series today. Everytime I think of Janner my heart gets depressed….I see the beauty in his sacrifice but I cry every single time. And I know it’ll take a few days to get over but I’m devastated. Definitely gonna read that doc to see if it at least helps some lol
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Lin replied to the topic What's the most recent piece of writing advice you’ve been given? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 7 months ago
@kathleenramm Hmm not really. He focused on other stuff haha.
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Just imagine. . . in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 7 months ago
*waves excitedly* WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN!!!!!!! *sends welcome goodie basket with chocolate, cookies, and books* SO awesome to see you here!! (Also, this has got to be one of the coolest and unique intro posts I’ve ever seen on KP, so you definitely deserve an award for that. ;P)
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Jodi Maile replied to the topic Free Christian Dystopian Book in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
Oooh thanks for sharing!! How exciting!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Free Christian Dystopian Book in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
OoOoOoOOo THIS IS SO EXCITING!!!! I am EXTREMELY stoked for the Reflections released. I just bought my copy of The House That Didn’t End (I know, I know… took me long enough, lol) a couple of weeks ago and CAN NOT wait to dive into it!!!!! I would sign up for an ARC copy but I sadly don’t meet the platform requirements of over 300…[Read more]
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Daisy Torres replied to the topic Free Christian Dystopian Book in the forum Publishing & Platform 4 years, 7 months ago
@e-k-seaver Eek I’m glad you’re getting it published!!! Congrats!!!
Would you like to write a guest post on my blog? I don’t have a super large following or anything, but I’d absolutely love to have you on if you’re willing! You could promote your book(s) if you’d like!
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
CONGRATS ON YOUR NOVEL!!!! I’m so happy for you! XD That is so exciting.
Hi! Welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia. 🙂 You’re writing about mermaids?? How fun! I’ve dabbled in writing mermaid stories myself! I ended up dropping that project, but it was a retelling of Ariel called Rebel. (Now that I’m thinking about it,…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Hi! I don’t think we’ve met yet. I’m Lydia. 🙂 Welcome (very belatedly) to the KP forum! As a side note, I saw you’re a fan of J.A.’s Persuasion, and I am, too! XD I think it’s my favorite J.A. book. 😀
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Lydia S. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Agh, WFR sounds FANTASTIC!!! I’m already rooting for Russel and Eliza. XD
Well, my WIPs are progressing minimally at the moment. However, my brain is still cooking up and mulling over scenes for my Biblical fiction series (And side books). And Simon (the Zealot). AH, I LOVE HIM SO MUCH. XD (Joining @elfwing in evil author…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic My Series Keeps Growing! in the forum Fantasy 4 years, 7 months ago
Ah, yes, the multiplying storyline issue. I have dealt with this before, but not in an extreme form. (I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing, honestly. lol) For my fantasy WIP, I started with a trilogy (and it might have even been meant to be a stand-alone, originally… I can’t remember). Then, the writer’s brain went…[Read more]
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