Evelyn collins

@starofthenorth

Thanks!! I like my characters too!! Lol I think I’ll make the moodboards soon!!

@godlyfantasy12

I need to add more Lukas!! There are times I forget to. 😅

@felicity

Yay!!

@mineralizedwritings

Thanks so much for the tips!! And there are a lot of important moments sprinkles throughout the book.
And yes, you should keep reading. Nothing outside the Orb is creepy. 🙂

@lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @freedomwriter76 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings

@felicity, the thing that Len gave to Amidala is definitely important. Sometimes I actually forget to mention it in future chapters 😅, but it will play a big role in the future! 😏

Next two chapters! (I already have like twenty written, so that’s why I’m getting the…[Read more]

@sarafini @godlyfantasy12

Yeah. I was just thinking Ev would try to make her jealous, but now that I think about it, they’d then have to have a conversation about it. That may kind of ruin the whole dynamic in my head for the actual book. 😅
I may just have him act like that with any girl, cause I’m playing around with that facet of his…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12
Girl!!! That looks so good!!!!! I ❤️ it!!

@felicity

I didn’t find myself confused at all bc you had the character’s names at the start of each chapter. I write in two POVs all the time. The way I signal it’s someone different it by starting each first sentence of the chapter with their name. (Well, at least most of the time)

Thanks for the feedback! 😀

Yep! You’re welcome!!

@sarafini

It may work better if you do change Jasmine’s age. 😅 But it’s up to you. I have my characters work around it.

@felicity

I love it so far!! I can really feel the characters’ personalities. And you’re doing a great job writing in present tense. Like, I’ve tried it before, and I just can’t do it right. 😅 So, awesome job! I can’t wait to read more!!

@felicity @lightoverdarkness

Lol! I don’t remember those parts in the movies.

In the movies, I didn’t really like Frodo either. (I’ve also only read the first LotR book, so maybe he actually is a great character 😅)

@koshka

Great idea for a topic!! I’ll definitely be on this thread as I research more my Civil War idea!

@felicity @freedomwriter76

Thanks!!

@keilah-h
Cool!!

@koshka

Yes, I play violin!! I use the Essential Elements but my teacher is gonna start me on Suzuki soon.

@felicity

I’m learning Spanish right now. After I learn Spanish, I actually want to learn French next.

@freedomwriter76 @koshka @felicity

Thank you all sooooo much!!! All your tips and info are super helpful!! I’ll try to keep you all updated as the story progresses!

And @felicity

The theme will probably be forgiveness.

@arien

It will definitely be worth it! There are so many songs I want to learn to play.

I think I’ve heard Spring played on the piano before! It is really pretty!

@felicity

Sorry! I meant to reply yesterday

You’re dog sounds adorable!!

And you’re learning Polish?? That’s so neat! Do you find it easy?

@wilder-w

Hey!! Nice to meet you!!

*whispers* and being a secret ninja is pretty neat. 😁 lol

And girl, though not my absolute favorite, gummy bears are great!!

@keilah-h

Neat!! Does it have something to do with a WIP?

@thelooneyone

What is yours about?

Here’s the blurb. I’m not sure if it explains it well enough. 😅 It’s not the greatest blurb bc my story changes a lot, tho. (If you’re interested, I’m posting chapters of my book on the thread “My WIP!!!”)

They’ve been trapped inside The Orb for twenty…

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@sarafini

Sorry if I don’t get their personalities right. I’m working with what I’ve got currently, lol. I can always change dialogue. 😉
It’s all good. You were close. The only thing I’ll change is Ami’s response. I’m playing around with Ev being a flirt bc there may be a few scenes like that in my WIP, so we’ll see how it goes! 😁

Also…[Read more]

@loopylin

I love that!!

@starofthenorth

I use an app literally called Moodboard. (I think it’s easier to use on a bigger screen, so I only use it on my iPad, not my phone) It’s not the best, but it works for me and it’s free.