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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.
One note: I was very…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?
The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!
I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅
@theducktator Praying!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
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Enid replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.
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Enid replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through? -
Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Sounds good.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks for asking!!!!
It’s been a rollercoaster. I have some good days, some bad days, some days where I just want to shut everyone out and not talk to anyone XD
And then I have some days that start out good and then end with me sobbing in my bathroom trying to get ready for bed 😭
The Devil also has been trying to attack me with…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ changed their profile picture 1 year, 3 months ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed awww that was really cute.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!
Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper yours are so wacky lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
all righty I got a bunch:
Chameleon woman joins a team of deranged human-animal hybrids and discovers they’ve all been made pawns in a plot spanning a century. Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.
Dragon-man from an unruly city…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Wow that looks so amazing!
The shading reminds me a lot of Chinese/Douyin art style which is something I’ve been trying to replicate since I started watching Donghua. It looks amazing!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Bruhhh I should totally do this!! My stories have no shortage of weird.
Keep in mind that very few of them have names though.
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Enid replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Aahh, okay. My theory was in vain!
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