Esther

@starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @arien @theloonyone @keilah-h @esther-c @sarafini @Any-one-else-i-may-have-forgotten-

Heres Matthew and Lyla’s moodboards!!

@esther-c

I think that was what I was kind of thinking in my head, I just couldn’t put words to it. 😅

🥰👍🏻👌🏻🎉

@arien @starofthenorth @theloonyone @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @esther-c @whalekeeper

@orielle21

I post chapters of my WIP  (“Afterthoughts”, working title) here sometimes, if you are interested. I’d recommend starting at the beginning of the forum if you feel like reading. No pressure, just if you are interested! Critiques are…[Read more]

@arien

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@mineralizedwritings

Previous to that, my sister and I would make up stories with out stuffies and toys.
Yes, us too! So much fun, right? I would make literally anything I was doing into a story when I was younger–mostly playing outside, but also cooking, cleaning my room, doing laundry, a…

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@esther-c

Well, because the world needs fiction that is clean, but not cheesy. It needs God-honoring books that aren’t preachy. They need truth! Sure, some books out there do have really good themes, but they have no basis for why that is right or good. Being a Christian writer enables me to write strong truths, (specifically for young adults), t…

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@arien @esther-c @lewilliams @keilah-h @felicity @mineralizedwritings @sarafini

Wow, all of y’all’s stories are so inspiring 😊😍!!
So, I’ve always loved reading. Even when I was little enough to not know how to read, I would sit in the floor with a picture book and try to read to myself and my mama.
When I was about eleven, I was on a zoom call…[Read more]

@orielle21

Fun story! I agree with @mineralizedwritings :

It seems like the kind of story you read when you need a pick me up. Low stakes, but still lots of fun, and the time travel thing makes it extra interesting!

Oof, the dialogue thing like @esther-c mentioned can be hard . . . I struggle with making it natural as well. (That’s what happens…[Read more]

@esther-c

So, I noticed that the kids are going to school. But it’s Christmastime. So that would be weird if they were going to school that close to Christmas Day.

Wow. I don’t know how I missed that….thanks for pointing it out. *thumbs up*

I suggest reading it aloud

I’ll try that. I do a lot of dialogue in my writing as you will see and so m…[Read more]

@felicity

Wait, are you sure he wasn’t teasing you? 🤣 It was pretty obvious to me!

Oh, no, I know when he’s teasing, and he wasn’t teasing 🤣. Okay, good!! 😂

@esther-c

Took me a while to reply, but now I am! 😁

Yay! Thank you for taking the time to respond 😊!

First of all, I could really feel the sibling dynamic! Great job on that! Sibling dynam…

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@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @starofthenorth @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @felicity @whalekeeper @theloonyone @loopylin @wilder-w @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ava-blue @folith-feolin @power @sarafini @madelyn

Enjoy the story if you care to read it….and please critique it as honestly as possible!! &…[Read more]

@loopylin ha that’s cute!

@godlyfantasy12 OOH I LOVE YOUR DRAGON IDEA!!! (at least back when the dragons and elves were friends) I’m currently writing a fanfic/AU where each member of my family and a bunch of my friends have dragons…

@theloonyone @esther-c

Feather

“Yes. There’s only ever been dragons and humans on my planet. My bro…[Read more]

@orielle21 @esther-c

Ok, we had an arctic front come in, so the wind chill is literally -26 here. NO JOKE. That’s negative twenty-six degrees Fahrenheit.

it’s crazy. The coldest I ever experienced before this was 0.

I expect we’ll see a polar bear soon.

@esther-c

Yeah I just looked it up…

It’s the right term. 😀

@esther-c

Wow that was a close call! I like how mysterious Dao is.

@esther-c luv Tyrone’s board! I already luv him XD

Grimm

Grimm lowered his arm from where he’d protectively placed it over Lyn and Nyx. He stared at the two newcomers, nodding his head in welcome.

The man from before, Aloth, was gone, his footsteps echoing as he exited down the hall.

“Seems to be quite a few unsavory people in this place…[Read more]

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @koshka anyone on?

@godlyfantasy12 @folith-feolin @starofthenorth @lewilliams @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @theloonyone

So yeah, the intense mind powers and extremely broken people was a turn-off for me, but I think an even bigger thing was how the kids were breaking rules (important rules!) and getting away with it/encouraged to keep doing it BY THE ADULTS IN…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theloonyone Don’t worry, I got Milo 😉 @esther-c (Wait, Esther, are you in this group?)

Aurivis 

A rope shot out from something one of the humans was holding, allowing them to climb up. Aurivis watched, mildly impressed by the contraption. The last man tried to climb the rope, but failed, sliding back down to the floor. Aurivis ch…[Read more]

@keilah-h @loopylin @esther-c

Milo

“If you want to continue speaking with me, come up to the roof.” Aurivis said. Why would they want to keep talking to it? It’s big!

“How about-” The others were already following the dragon. Crosshair shot a grapple to the ceiling and started climbing up it, Feather behind him. Milo watched as most of the grou…[Read more]