Elizabeth Hearten

@kyronthearcanin

thanks!!

@kyronthearcanin

I just love how he can’t decide whether to be super tough or his regular self XD

@kyronthearcanin

That would be great!!

@kyronthearcanin

Chapter 4 did not disappoint!!! Looking forward to more! (Dune is totally my favorite character. This chapter solidified it in my mind XD)

@kyronthearcanin

I just saw these posts, but I’m on Spotify too and found the playlist!! Great picks!

Here goes! That was a hard place to start from, but…

I’m not sure how deep I expected the hole to be, but I hit the ground far before I expected to. My knees buckled with the impact, and I felt myself crumple to the ground. It was harder than I expected. Not dirt, but some type of sand-coated stone.

I hadn’t realized my eyes were closed until…[Read more]

I’m in!!

@starshiness @kyronthearcanin @gwyndalf-the-wise

Thank you guys so much for the feedback! And for catching the errors. 😉 I’ve made the decision to try to break my idea down into several short stories like you suggested. I think that’ll be better than trying to cram everything into one really loooong short story. Too many of those already exist…[Read more]

@esther-c

Thank you so much for the feedback and the compliment 😉 I’m so glad you enjoyed it! Description is one of my favorite parts of fiction writing, so I’m glad I was able to pull it off well. I think all of your edits are good catches and I’ll definitely tweak those.

@esther-c

Ahh!! They have such great meanings too!!!

@esther-c

YESSSS. 🥹🥹 Emma is my all-time favorite.

@starshiness

That’s a beautiful mood board!! Your quotes are really perfect too. Feel free to tag me if you post more!

@esther-c

Also…THEIR. NAMES. I’m a sucker for perfect character names and I loved theirs!! So gloriously Annerian….

@esther-c

You’re so welcome!! Thank you again for letting me read it. Seriously, this is gold. Your writing is great, especially for someone your age! You’ve got a lot of talent 😉

@gwyndalf-the-wise and @kyronthearcanin

I’m so glad you guys like it!! *curtsies* Again, it’s an old piece and I wasn’t sure if I should just scrap it. Thanks for finding those grammatical errors!

Here’s the deal…I do have another part. I was planning on having both Will and Emma flashback to show their really different home lives and their…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Yes, it was great!! Thanks so much for posting it and allowing me to read it.

@esther-c

THIS IS FANTASTIC. I AM IN TEARS.

That’s one of my favorite songs, and you did so well with it!!! Ack…I have to calm down…

Anyway, spot on prose, girl!! The way you wove in the song was priceless. If you make edits, great, but DO NOT touch the storyline!! Esther, this is amazing. Truly.

Ahoy there, @she-is-a-pirate!

I’m Landri, a college nursing student/fiction fantasy writer/reader, and I dearly love fiction that takes place on the high seas. Have you read The True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle by Avi by any chance? That is my favorite pirate story.

Questions (pirate edition)!

-If you could choose anyone to be your first…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Great job on Chapter 3!! It had good follow-up from Chapter 2 and might just be my favorite chapter yet. All of you herbalism/healing techniques are spot on, and the descriptions of the ship really added to the cool sci-fi vibes. I could picture everything easily. Keep up the good work! Your charries are so likable and fun. Great…[Read more]