Jaybird

@elishavet-pidyon

Glad to have given you an idea.

I wasn’t sure if my idea of people communicating with animals is lame-sounding or not. It’s based on my imaginative world when I was little changed a bit but the world, peoples, cultures, and fantasy creatures still have their roots in that. When I was young I’d spend hours upon hours going on…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting
True. Where do all those Eastern Dragons be tho?

@trahia-the-minstrel

True. True. I actually liked the three introductions when I first read it too. I thought it was a deliberate poke at all the fantasy clichés. I hoped the story would be a somewhat fun yet heartfelt parody of the common fantasy stories. However, the rest of…[Read more]

Thanks so much for the tips everyone. They are all helpful. I just realized I forgot to mention anything about the prison or the escape. Might have been helpful…
So my two girl characters Kedja and Zyla are trying to escape a prison that they’ve been brought to to be trained to work for Okdor, my Villain. Kedja, through a very tragic back…[Read more]

@faith-q

Well… I’d say everyone else here has given great answers.

I’d say the same thing. With your characters actions if he messes up be sure to portray the wrong as wrong.

Again with the government and any authority we are commanded to obey them unless it goes against the Bible. And when we can’t obey still do it respectfully. Like @elishavet…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien @christi-eaton @gretald @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @anatra23 @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @elfwing @elanor @e-k-seaver @trahia-the-minstrel @william-starkey @abigail-m @whoever-likes-the-trashfeather-saga

Okay. I’m going back to the gym now. This was way too much nerdy book stuff for one day.

IT’S LEG DAY BABY LEZZ GOOOO!

@elishavet-pidyon I didn’t comment on it, sorry.

@elishavet-pidyon Okay, cool. It’s really good!

@elishavet-pidyon I love it! Is that the end or are you planning to write more?

@elishavet-pidyon Great! I think you can just copy the link and post it here? I don’t have much experience with Google docs yet, but I think there’s a share button in the corner.

@elishavet-pidyon Could you put it on here once you’re done? If you don’t want to that’s all right.

@elishavet-pidyon XD Makes sense. I joined the Kingdom a little after I started writing so it really has been a long time.

@elishavet-pidyon About six years at this point. I’m old, haha.

@elishavet-pidyon Nice, nice. I’m looking forward to seeing how you grow!

@elishavet-pidyon I’ve finished first drafts of loads of things, but haven’t really gotten around into the editing phases, so I don’t know if I can exactly call it finished, haha. How long have you been writing?

@elishavet-pidyon Is this your first book?

@elishavet-pidyon *deadpan eyes* To find a job.

Oo, Alyona sounds awesome! And I’m glad you’re able to know what themes you’re going to express; I never seem to know what my themes are, even after I’m long done with something. I suppose I’ll have to ask an English teacher one day…

@elishavet-pidyon Ah, main characters are always a struggle for me too. I tend to develop them as I’m writing, so I don’t tend to know who they are until I start.

Yeah, I’m really busy right now too with school. School makes everything rough.

@elishavet-pidyon What about you? What are you currently working on?

@elishavet-pidyon

*Gasps and tentatively waves a paw at your disappearing form.*

Good day to you too, mysterious human. Pleased to see you around.

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