@elishavet-pidyon
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
NEXT SECTION!!!
“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.
“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.
Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!
Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?
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whaley replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
*is in bliss*
XD I was pretty satisfied too. While drawing, that is.
The harder or darker a line, the more shadow I expect it to be in. If it is light and slightly broken, I expect it to be in direct light or even a glare.
Ooohh, how did I not think of this?? That is a very good point, thank you. I suppose it might help if I fill…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
I plan on posting another section today as usual, but since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore, I’m wondering if Y’all need me to wait a day or two? What do y’all think? I don’t want to completely lose ya.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
Re-tagging Y’all. (sorry if you already got a notification) KP was acting glitchy for me this morning, and hybridlore told me the notification didn’t end up getting to her, so I thought I’d be safe.
IF YOU DIDN’T SEE IT THERE IS A NEW SECTION.
There was also a new section…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@esther-c @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @raxforge @rae @freed_and_redeemed @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @theducktator @theshadow @the_lost-journal @trailblazer @keilah-h @anyone-else-i’m-blanking
I’m doing something drastic.
Something crazy.
I suppose I shall start at the beginning…
Our youth…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Putting another character in here
Lois
“Hey, Brea,” Lois said after finding his sister’s hiding spot in the library. She turned around in her chair to face him, looking surprised.
“I just got Mother’s letter saying you were coming. Why she didn’t bother to use the telephone is beyond me. How are you doing?”…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
I’ll tag the art people. Don’t feel obligated to reply.
@loopylin @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint @grcr @elishavet-pidyon @i-know-im-forgetting-someone-please-help
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.
“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.
“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Sorry…I looked for the Susan story but couldn’t find it. I found some others, but none of them compared to the one I read. It was short, but very beautiful, sweet, and Christian.
If you like, I can retell what I remember of the story.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle (In case you were wondering about Guy as well)
Here’s somewhat of a summary:
A man searching for redemption from his past…
A band of outlaws trying to make a difference…
A land twisted and poisoned by its cold-hearted rulers…
Guy is a young man living with a deep inner…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Imperial Winters are not very exciting, so I’m going to try to cover the whole time in this next section. We’ll see if I can pull it off.
The fifteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 2nd
The EmpireEarly this morning, I wa…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Yes, he is the protagonist.
Thank you for your tips!
I use Bryce as Guy’s younger brother.
Guy and Bryce originally came from a different story that I had, and that’s where I fell in love with Bryce, but that story sort of to the shelf of books that would never be written. I was sad about that since I loved the brother…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
You have a BRYCE????!!! Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore that name because of one of my characters! I read Susan’s fan fiction story after the train accident. It was really good.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle
Big news! I just completed my first-ever mood board!!!! I’m so excited to hear what you all think! Do you all have any tips for making them?
Guy is my MC from my wip, Refuge Rangers. I’m planning to make boards for his men…and write a short story to go along with each…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon yep, cheesecake! My mom makes a really good one.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 5 months ago
I imagine scenes and plot points behind almost any instrumental song. But when it’s from Apollo 13, which I have never watched… I’m not perfectly comfortable just connecting the two. And of course it feels awkward to explain to people.
yep, pretty much. I see my own stories playing out in my mind, or the plot of the origi…[Read more]
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