@elishavet-pidyon
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Did any book influence your current WIP? in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
And just because I’m curious, how would you do that? I mean, in what way does this spiritual layer work into your setting and story? I’m just curious, so if it’s a dreadful spoiler or something don’t worry about answering.
Ok so… I really don’t know. I want the beauty of nature as God’s creation to play a important role. T…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Grimm!!!! *Sob*
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Zlatan
“We’re stopping, and you are going to rest,” Grimm stared at him. “But if you have a problem with that, you’re free to go your own way.”
Vulkasin laughed. And kept laughing till he sank helplessly to the floor. Great. Zlatan cut his eyes at his brother, but he couldn’t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I KNOW!!!!
Paxton
He couldn’t stop the tears coming from his eyes now, all he could do was hide them in the fur of his bear.
He glanced up and, with blurred vision, could see that the others were crying too.
Reuben was watching with soft, tear-stained eyes. He wiped them away.
Leo whispered g…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka UGH ZLATAN!!! Okay, Zlatan is srsly gonna be getting to Grimm now….
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Grimm
Zlatan had the look of determination in his eyes. Refusal to accept the help of others.
But more then that…
His words…the pain in his features, displayed more then just a physical issue.
It showed a guilt that Grimm knew first…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Vulkasin
At last. Someone to make Zlati slow down for a moment.
But his brother had that quirk in his brow which said he was thinking. Analyzing.
“I’m a Desanik. I’ll be fine.” He gave the edge of his cloak a jerk. “But if you vant to stop a moment…V’e do need to know v’hat happened to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Arabella
“…Would any of you young ladies know where we might be?” Vince asked, eyes kind as he looked around.
“I’m afraid we’re also at a loss…” Cécile looked around at the surroundings.
“Well, lucky for you, we know exactly where we are!” Jocelyn grinned, voice exuberant.
Ara let out a small laug…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon afraid so….
@freedomwriter76 I’m glad u decided to keep future Riker and Leon XD!! I really love them lol!! @koshka
Paxton
“…Your brothers…they hurt you…didn’t they?”
Paxton fingered the crystal around Hope’s neck, squeezing his legs together. His stomach twisted and flipped at the memories.
(hey so In this Paxton does…
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Microphage6032 posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
Y’ALL IT HAPPENED!!!
I’m no longer a Bumbling Henchmen…
I am now a CHARISMATIC REBEL!!! Woo-Hoo!
@freedomwriter76 @ava-blue @queen_of_alvastia @lydia-s @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anatra23 @starshiness @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka AWWW ZLATAN UR NOT A WEAKLING!!! @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
His eyes scanned Zlatan. The man was definitely in pain. He could tell.
He’d worn the look that Zlatan had painted on his face many times, hiding the injuries he held. The pain inside, wether physical or no.
And…he’d seen it on others too.
Back in the rebel…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Zlatan
He carefully set aside the strangeness of what had just happened. They needed to move, to find whoever was responsible for turning Nyx into a mad creature.
But to do that, they’d need speed. Zatan sucked in a breath and leaned against the wall for a moment. Mentally, he gathered up all…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I’m trying to decide if I should go ahead and write a Corvina RP…..I think so.
also what did u think of Edric and Aramis?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon thank u!! Also this is gonna be cool reading Alwin and William’s RPs!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka understandable!! Ah I love how Vulkasin describes it, and I love all of them!! @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
“Zat v’as amazing.”
Grimm glanced at the brothers. Zlatan was still frozen, eyeing Grimm with thin golden eyes, as if studying him.
Vulkasin just seemed in awe, his face beaming with curiosity and questions. Thoug…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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This is a little difficult to write, as the twins actually are wolves.
The Twins
Zlatan stood frozen to the wall, his eyes thinning to liquid gold slits.
Vulkasin clamped his mouth shut. How long had he been staring with it hanging like that? Ever since Grimm had done…well, whatever that wa…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon I think freedom goes to bed probably fairly early due to school maybe? So we’re just at a standstill with November, Viktor, Paxton, Luna, etc till morning 😊 which is totally fine! Hey Elishavet u got any charries u wanna add or not really
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka Annia is so much like Lyn! Or at least younger Lyn! She’s still like that but she’s grown up just a little bit (tho not too much XD!!!
also any idea if @elishavet-pidyon or @freedomwriter76 is on?
OH I GOTTA DO A NYX AND GRIMM RP 🤣
OKAY SO….
I was writing this and I was kinda bored….so….this spiraled….Vulkasin and Zlatan will…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Annia
Now that there was no more…no more…blood, she could come bounding over with as much energy as usual.
The fairy had been crying, her nose and cheeks all pink and rosey.
Oh, wait. She hadn’t introduced herself yet. She waved to the others.
“My name’s Annia Winston. Good to meet…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Now…how to write Aramis and Edric…I’ve never even considered writing them in POV before… 😳
Edric
“Could you try not to make so much noise?” Edric glared at his younger brother, fists clenching and unclenching steadily.
Aramis merely smirked, shaking a strand of brown hair out of his face. “Psshh,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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Jocelyn
Superior Officer?
Lyn’s face twisted. How could someone do that to a person? Even if you were in charge of them?
If anything, that should make you want to care for them…
Not abuse them.
But…she knew now just how the world worked…and that oftentimes, people didn’t always do what they were…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AGH THE BOIS ARE SO SWEEET 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️
Paxton
They were all on the ground now. All sitting. Staring. At him.
He flushed, hands still trembling as he backed into the wall as far as he could.
”We won’t hurt you. Ever. We promise.” Leo was finishing, his eyes soft, just like all of the others…[Read more]
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Well, Congratulations! Woo-hoo!!
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NOICE. Charismatic Rebel is probably my favorite rank too 😀