@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon yall on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
OOF…. Reuben… 😭 I’m sorry Grimm didn’t mean to do that…but you’ve just hurt him too….
Nyx
“Do you even care about anyone!?”
One of the younger men was being held back.
Reuben.
Paxton gasped, eyes even wider now. He let out a cry, stepping back. Wolfgang gasped, turning t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Grimm
Vulkasin was skilled in his work. It took a while, but Leo’s wound was patched up rather nicely, considering what little they had to work with.
Still, Grimm couldn’t help but see the open wound on the man’s abdomen, bleeding out. Blood that ebbed and flowed, reminding him of a sim…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
All our poor charies! Seriously, authors can be cruel sometimes.
(The medical stuff in my books is not purely medieval. However, much of it is, so if something seems a bit weird, that’s probably why.)
The twins
Vulkasin seemed to have lost track of the conversations around him.…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Thanks, Grimm, for breaking that up so I didn’t have to watch Crosshair and Leo verbally shred each other……
(no I’m serious.)
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon
Crosshair
“That’s enough! Both of you.” snapped Grimm, the wolf shifter. “Look, Leo,” he eyed the other man as he said it, “Your brothers are alive. I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h hoo boy. Grimm’s gonna have to break this up… @elishavet-pidyon
Grimm
Leo erupted…
The fire and guilt in his eyes so familiar…
Grimm flinched but it was barely visible. He knew his friends probably saw it, but doubted anyone else did. He…he could see himself so vividly in Leo’s glare.
And then Crossh…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Okay then! So she’s not completely redeemed yet, but she’s starting to realize it?
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Feather
“No…there are others besides…mammals. Birds, ocean life. Whatever animal there is, creature, there’s usually a shifter form to go with it.” the little fox-like creature explained. He seemed to…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@keilah-h oops my bad!!! Lol!! Also Corvina is an antagonist. She hasn’t been redeemed yet, but throughout the series she keeps showing the reader more and more of how she can be, and even now she’s showing more of that side of herself, but she’s still considered a bad guy/the opposition (especially to some like Grimm)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I can’t wait for Paxton to find November and then because Esen is gonna trigger a memory with him and his brothers I’ve had brewing in my brain FOREVER!!!!
Aaaagghhhh I want to show y’all so bad but I gotta wait for the right time 😂
hey maybe it’ll show up sooner who knows 😂
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keolah-h @elishavet-pidyon hola amigas! Anyone on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
November
“November…” The ginger started, feeling a weight on his shoulder. He looked over at Riker’s concerned gaze. “Are you alright?”
“Hm? O-Oh! Y-Yea…sorry…Just, spaced out for a second I guess,” he chuckled. “Umm…do all of you want to keep going? Or…umm…I don’t know…” he shrugged.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @loopylin I’m actually working on a drawing of Kad, hopefully
I’ll have him done by tomorrow!Kad
“Hey, look! I think this door leads outside!” cried the little alien–Eddie.
“I’ll go first, just in case. Everyone, fall in behind.” said the human called Wayne, unsheathing his sword. Weird, it was metal, not like dragons’…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomeriter76 @keilah-h
Grimm
Paxton’s eyes grew wide at Vulkasin’s sudden outburst, he ducked, burying his head a bit. Vulkasin winced as his brother sent him a glare.Paxton peeked out, “Why…Why d-did s-someone h-hurt you…?” He whispered.
Grimm walked up, “Pax…he may not…want to discuss it. You understand.”
Pax…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone here?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
He let Snow down and took his hand. “Not quite like Leo. He has a fresh wound, but I’m already healing.”
“If only you would.” Vulkasin muttered, his arms crossed.
“B-but why are…are you h-hurt?”
Zlatan glanced away. “It’s no’fing much.”
“V’hat?!” His brother started beside him. F…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Yes, Zlatan is gold, Vulkasin greeny-yellow.
Zlatan
Soft arms wrapped around him, pulling him back from the black cell. He opened his eyes to see Paxton looking up at him. He swallowed.
But what was the little lad saying? That everything would be fine, that he shouldn’t be…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@koshka AHHH NO!! @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
The little boy stepped back, gasping. Everyone seemed at a loss for words.The dark haired man just suddenly began….
To cry…
Had…had Paxton done…said something wrong?
Paxton watched as his brother reached for him, then recoiled, as of afraid the slightest touch wo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Zlatan was…weeping?! The group stopped.
His brother hardly ever showed much emotion, or at least not like most people. And he would never cry.
Vulk started to reach for his brother’s shoulder, then quickly recoiled remembering just in time. He but his lip, at a total loss…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
AGH! *Gasp* You did it alright.
Paxton, you’re so sweet…Please don’t get scared about what’s about to happen.
Zlatan
No. Oh no.
The little boy was looking up at him with those blue blue eyes. “A-Are y-you h-hurt…?”
You can’t lie to a child.
A child.
Just childre…[Read more]
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