@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh! Joshua should totally approach Paxton with the flyer, I was trying to figure out how he would even like “want” to go or whatever. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
Jocelyn peeked her head through the doors of the cafeteria, eyes scanning the crowd. She spotted November and Ara at a table in the back, and nearly hopped ove…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Paxton
Paxton looked back at his brother, whose eyes still watched him before returning to Ezra. The two began a…very heated conversation.
Paxton winced, pulling closer to Wolfgang and Reuben.
“Hey, it’s okay,” Wolfgang said, a small smile on his lips. Paxton glanced at him, and then gave a small s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 OOH YALL….also…
Lyn is about to do some SCHEEEEEMING!!!!
Jocelyn
Lyn sighed, walking down the hall, eyes roving from door to door.
“Lyn…that’s the fourth time you’ve sighed in less then two minutes…” Grimm said, “Calm down.”
“But what if he’s-!”
“Lyn…”
“Or what if-!”
“Jocelyn…”
“And what…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon UUUGH I LUC ALWIN. AND REÚVEN. AND VIKTOR. AND LIORA. AND WINTON!!! ALL OF UR CHARRIES!!!
@koshka is Almarrin in the college part of the academy, I think you’d already said that but yea XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
He smiled at the boy and lightly squeezed his shoulder. If only the brat would come for him from now on instead of messing with the youths and children. “My name’s Almarrin Woden. Welcome to my table. Have you two eaten?”
“No, but it’s alright.” The lass smiled as prettily as an E…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon soooo I saw the title of this forum XD. Just thought I’d share some art I did.
btw…I do art by using bases. I trace over bases and then add the details like the hair and clothes and all that such! Just feel I needed to disclaimers 😅 but yea!!
So this piece I actually did waaay back a while ago…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon love him ALREADY!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon SCREEE YES!!!!
YALL!! I’m now imagining this scene with all our abused charries in the same setting with Winton holding an after school/after class session and they’re all kinda sharing that they’ve been abused and it’s like “wait you too?!” 😭
especially when my charries finally convince my…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Winton could be the school counselor! You know, the person kids get sent to if they have mental, emotional, or other such problems, such as extreme anxiety or suicidal thoughts. Even if he isn’t the ‘official’ counselor, but more of the person kids go to who need any sort of help? Someone they know will be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Almarrin
One of the boys had begun speaking, but he held up a hand to silence him, eyes locked on the confrontation near the lunch line.
A red headed boy with his arm in a sling had just pushed the Great Winged Brat away from a brown haired girl, but something about their exchange felt…off.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon hmmm
Well first off we now have other charries in this AU to help reach Alwin 😊
secondly, you could always bring in Winton to the AU, perhaps as a teacher (one of those that wishes to truly connect with his students, or to change some of the things he sees in the school?)
Or a chaplain.
A preacher (like u mentioned the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I totally get that and ROFL ABOUT THE THOUGHT IDEA THING XD!!!
But Alain’s POV is really good and it’s gonna be so great when he becomes redeemed!! In this AU EVEN!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon agh poor Alwin!!!
also….so I don’t wanna be hard to get along with at all!! And I do have things I’ve read with a bit of language but I just would really prefer on here (since with this sight it is one place I know for a fact is a okay as a Liberty) if it could be “He cursed” She cursed” kinda keep it to that?
&nbs…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 we’re still on the road headed home, so we listened online. It was very good, about how praise heals, and trials grow patience ect. (From James and Romans). @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Oh Hitchens has no idea how close he came to one of those brothers hunting him down.
And um…so the poetic justice of using one of the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 oh boy…. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Arabella
Wolf…Fox…
“Grimm and Nyx! You’ve seen them!” Luna cried, eyes sparkling. “Oh, then they are here!” A small smile lit her lips, her mind obviously not grasping the man’s sadistic grin…
The words he’d been implying before…
He’d met them…along with some others.
A blonde boy…<…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic First chapter of my book . . . in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 5 months ago
Thank you, that helps a lot!
I especially liked the way you describe the characters bit by bit. The piece where the candlelight is illuminating Aedan’s face was an especially fine part to read. I love the way it formed his features in my mind.
Thank you! I enjoy describing how I see the characters in my mind, but I didn’t want t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon anyone here?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Okay y’all!
Zlatan
The little fox whimpered in a fitful sleep, his head jerking slightly as if he was still fighting. Zlatan frowned.
Nyx needed help, yet how could he get him it, here in a forsaken castle.
There was always…but what if…he shook his head and dug out the little green…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h can we get started back here again?? K rlly wanna continue it!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 5 months ago
Jocelyn
“Oh sure! This is my second year!”
“That’s really not that long…”
“Feels like it! Well…it’s my second year of high school. We came here for middle grade too. Well, our final years of middle grade anyway.” Lyn smiled, shoving the box of multi-colored pencils into her bright red and gold bag.
“By the by…” Lyn pursed h…[Read more]
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