@elishavet-pidyon
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Felicity replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @sarafini @elishavet-pidyon @kathleen-ramm @esther-c @theloonyone
Here’s chapter three of my WIP Overcome if anyone’s interested!
Any feedback you might have is very welcome! 😀
Glossary of…[Read more]
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Light started the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey, everyone!! I’ve seen pics of charries scattered around the forum, but I haven’t found a topic for just pictures of characters…so I made this!! Feel free to post anything else about your charries too!
Tags!! Â @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @arien @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @queen_of_alva…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AGHH 😭 I HAVE A FEELING THEY DON’T GET TOGETHER AND THEY’RE BOTH ALONE WHY DO I GET THAT FEELING?!?!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon AWWWW!! DOES HE?! 🥹 plz say he does or I shall be devestatingly heartbroken for him….
Yes, November practically had the love at first sight moment when he met Ara at the tender age of 4-5 🥰
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@everyone whoa tons of responses too many ppl to tag 🤣 thanks everyone who loves Ara and November!! AKA Aravember or Novella!!
@esther-c LUKE SKYWALKER?!?! BEST SHIP NAME EVER!!!!
(tho I do luv Novella….XD)
Also @elishavet-pidyon I read that part about Reúven and no joke my face went from 😁 to 😳 in like one second
I’m glad u chan…[Read more]
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Erica replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @arien @whoeverelseiforgot
So I have a romantic subplot in my WIP and I love it lol . . . 😍🤣
Christopher and Briana have an interesting relationship. When they are fifteenish (they haven’t met each other yet) their fathers sort of arrange for them to eventually get married.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @felicity @esther-c
SPEAKING OF ROMANTIC SUBPLOTS/PLOTS
i literally can’t make this post without mentioning my main subplot (that actually could be a full plot since it’s really important to the actual plot too and one of the MCs Charrie arcs 😂)
And that is….
ARA AND NOVEM…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @whalekeeper @gracie-j @felicity @anybody-else XD
Soo this topic has been made due to some keeper that seems to be needing some help, and also this topic would probably be useful for a lot of us, since I’m sure quite a few of us have some sort of romantic subplot in our stories, wether b…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
🤩 The Vilder is so cool! The poem really caught my imagination!! I’m getting LotR vibes… Like with the lore and stuff. Your worldbuilding sounds really deep.
So actually, this is the WIP with Amidala and Everton. The theme that I really want to portray is trusting God in the dark. They have to deal with a l…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
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Light replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @esther-c @any-one-else
Sooo, my plot hole!! Yay! *Grins nervously*
So, in my new book, There’s two siblings. 13 year old Asher and 16 year old Iris. The story opens with them living at a foster home/orphanage/something like that. And they hate it. Especially Asher. Then…[Read more]
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Pen_for_Christ205 replied to the topic The-Bad-Guys-With-No-Name Kinda Need A Name (just a little bit) in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
I must ask, is this a fantasy? Or more historical-ish fiction and what not?
It’s a mix of both. I don’t like research, but history has some great ideas I like to use. But of course, there’s a bit of fantasy too, like the dragomoth and other mythical creatures. Thanks for your help btw 🙂
First, do you need a name…
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Erica started the topic I need a creature name! in the forum Fantasy 3 years, 4 months ago
Hey!
So in my WIP, I have this creature that needs a name. They live underground in caves.
I picture them as a cross between Ridgerunners, Oompa Loompas, and squirrels. They’re about fourish feet tall.
They’re also slightly evil.
If any artists want to draw them, I’d love to see it!
@mineralizedwritings @madelyn @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loop…[Read more]
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Arien replied to the topic Sensitive Topics: Abuse in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @wilder-w @elishavet-pidyon @folith-feolin @sarafini @loopylin
Sorry I’m late to respond, but . . . finals, uffda. Anyway, here I am!
*some sort of warning here, but I’m not sure for what . . . abuse I guess, but isn’t that what this forum is about?*
As I mentioned earlier, Elinor and Aedan were abused by their guardians. It’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon ahhh love it!!!! Ur writing so good!!! So beautiful and immersive!!!
@koshka yea, it can be odd, it’s mainly one point of kitsunes I’m considering…we’ll actually a belief that one culture has about foxes overall….
Agh I’m trying to be vague so as not to give anything away cuz I’m not entirely sure if I wanna take that route ye…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Sensitive Topics: Abuse in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon that’s beautiful!!
So yes, toxic parent fits!
I watched a video in writing abuse the other day that was so informative. Sadly it had some language in this one part, but the lady gave some wonderful advice, and also gave the difference between Toxic and Abusive parents.
Thing is, a lot of times, Abusive parents are ob…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago
Fantasy is honestly my favorite genre and I’m not sure if I could ever get fully burnt out of it (but hey never say never XD) just because there’s so many different things u can. The possibilities are endless!! And just…the idea of fantasy worlds, and elves and dragons and fairies and…AGH! I love it! And making up my own versions of all of those t…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon Nice!!
@lightoverdarkness6 Yeah that happened to me. It was a terrible fanfiction effort…….really didn’t have much of a plot. There was something of a romance sideplot, but without a main plot it was kinda pointless.
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Koshka replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
So! What are everyone’s MC’s themes?
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Felicity replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @anyone
*shuffles in glumly*
Hello fellow writers. Greetings from the land of unfulfilled dreams. Here it is 36*F and the sun is sluggishly cold. In this land are many different kinds of people of all trades and occupations. Actually, some of them don’t have any occupation yet, just…[Read more]
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