Elishavet Elroi

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Okay, little UPDATE y’all.

We had a death in the family. (don’t worry, not someone I even met before. He was on my dad’s side of the family and they’re all messed up.) Anyhow, due to craziness and the fact that my dad is the only sane person on that sid…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

What have you used to digitize art? I do analog/traditional art, so I would need to scan or photograph it. But I have noticed a bit of distortion when I do.

I tend to hand draw, scan with my photocopier, and then put it into software to clean it up. I’ll give you a link to a website for an artist who I like and is clean, because…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Being an illustrator is one of my ambitions as well. I’ve never been commissioned to do anything yet. I did talk to one publishing company that someone who comes to my congregation is involved in, but my art style did not fit the needs of the author they have, and they have been a bit too busy to talk further about it. (Once I…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Okay…. so here is where I hit a slight problem. Leon and Julian use a very different script which is how you tell their writing apart. However, those fonts don’t transfer. So, I’ll italicize anything Julian writes, and have anything Le…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Okay! Sounds great!

I don’t digitalize. I just scan in, and I’ve never noticed blur. (I don’t notice blur on the ones you’ve sent us……)

@elishavet-pidyon

That would be so cool!!!

I know! I could never pay $2,000+!!

So, what are you thinking your rates would be? And would you do it by the hour or the drawing?

(I think by the drawing is prob. more up and up, because otherwise one could be prone to stretch the time it takes, not that you would do that, but ya know what I mean.…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

That would be so cool! I’m currently illustrating my saga, but I also LOVE your art and would consider hiring you to illustrate for me. (One book in particular could really benefit from your style) I don’t know if that’s something that you would be interested in.

I’ve never sold my art, but I think starting a website and…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

You might be an author if you randomly eavesdrop on strangers so you can get story ideas.

I lowkey love eavesdropping and people watching, but it’s hard to make it inconspicuous. 🤣

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NEXT SECTION!!!

(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)

The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…

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@hybridlore   K.

QUESTION FOR THOSE WHO HAVE READ ALL POSTED SECTIONS.

So, as we all know, and @elishavet-pidyon pointed out….. Julian took that first encounter full-tilt and without a necessary dose of wise caution. However….. now I’m a little stuck.

Julian and Leon are living in the house of a family who worship’s idols. Due to their c…[Read more]

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I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.

@raxforge @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon

I’m one of the nerd who wants people to think he’s cool, so I use Crossway’s Elect Standard Version.

I wounder what the Bee would do with the LSB. Maybe Lazy Scholar’s Bible? (Since the translators were so lazy they didn’t even bother to translate some words from Greek/Hebrew to English)

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The next morning, both young men were extremely tired. They ate a light breakfast, but neither of them felt like getting up and walking again. Leon decided to lay down and doze for another hour or so, and Julian pulled out the book from J…

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@elishavet-pidyon

I liked how you had Neveah try to combat the lie, and it’s obvious it’s for Sef’s sake, not her own. To make this sequence really work, maybe make Sef think her Mani is just trying to save herself – it’s not a lie about Sef, but it would make the former lie hit home. Make her really crumble since the last thing keeping the lie f…

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@elishavet-pidyon

wowww…that’s a lot to think about and really helpful!!! Thank you!

@elishavet-pidyon

Lol. Leon is more experienced than Julian. J will level out, he’s just excited and nervous and high strung and…. you get the point.

@elishavet-pidyon

WHY would ANYONE in his right mind Say That?

It’s Julian who needs this speech. Go ask him.

He’s a little hot headed, he’s a firebrand, and he’s desperately excited to share the truth with his people.

 

Anyway, you probably do all that in this book, and I am really enjoying reading this. So far cultures are fascinating and the…

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@elishavet-pidyon

YES those are what I’m looking for!!!!
I will definitely be using those later in my book…

But I’m struggling with a specific scene where I need a lie XDXD and none of these seem to fit…

“Well, what are you waiting for?” the Master spat, motioning for Iver to continue. “You may begin whenever you are ready.”

Sef’s knees sho…

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NEXT SECTION! 2

It was after sunset, and Julian and Leon were walking alone in the dim light. “So, how should we go about this?” Julian asked.

“I say the same as we did when on the run in Ardenta. We’ll try to get a place to sleep with a family, shar…

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