Elishavet Elroi

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Remington

“Well, it goes against curfew, don’t you know! That’s all. I’m not insinuating that it’s dangerous – I’m just saying, on the off chance that it might cause you trouble, you should stay in bed!”

Yes, that is best.

Remington sighed and changed the subject. “I must leave you. Parting is such sweet sorrow. I have…[Read more]

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Remington

The boy was too tired to even remember what a lobster was. Remington patted his shoulder, taking on a paternal tone. “It’s a crustacean. You’ll understand in time.”

Something unrelated popped into his head. He took Wilhelm’s other shoulder and held him at arm’s length. His huge teal eyes opened wide, like an otherwor…[Read more]

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Remington

“…And I told him no, I haven’t spoken to my grandfather in four years, and I’m allergic to lobster.” Remington stopped to grin at Wilhelm.

@loopylin

The struggle to not overcommit is real

@elishavet-pidyon

with the personality of a prized hawk

Lovely description!

Remington

“That’s up to you! Nothing is required, but everything is encouraged. This place costs quite a pretty penny. And you only have so much time before your older family member -” he imitated slitting his thr…[Read more]

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I am thinking I visualized the scene a little differently for some reason, as if the boys were standing. This makes more sense. XD

I pictured them as standing or sitting, each doing his own thing, but still noticeably part of the group. I should have been more clear about that. But we made enough sense to reply to each other, so…[Read more]

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😝 Given the fact that Marcel has saved multiple students from injury or death when teachers didn’t, that post wrote itself.

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Remington

Wilhelm declined the prince’s offer.

Remington made a little stuttering sound. He watched helplessly as the two other boys faced each other.

“You sure?” Jasper asked. “There’s just enough here for you to join us.”

Wilhelm declined again, pleasantly, but firmly. He began to walk away as if he didn’t care at all.…[Read more]

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Jasper

“To find rivals.” Jasper gazed at Wilhelm for an extended moment. Something told him this kid was more useful than the rest of the new rabble. Maybe it was instinct. Or just wishful thinking. He tapped an empty chair, next to where he stood. “You must have arrived late. Dessert’s still on the table, if you want it.”

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Wilhelm, my boy, you got this. You’re tough. You’re confident. NOT a cur.

Jasper (the prince in blue)

“Jasper, son of the High Commandant himself. Firstborn.”

Thunder above, did Jasper love to say those words to someone for the first time.

People’s faces shifted – from curiosity, to eventual realization and respect.…[Read more]

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Hehehehehe 😁 Poor Wilhelm. So much information in so little time.

Remington

Remington lit up. Across the room stood a group of richly attired young noblemen. They were all laughing very hard about something – it didn’t matter what. They looked perfect.

“See those guys?” Remington hissed in Wilhelm’s ear. “They’re probably ta…[Read more]

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Popping in because this is fun to watch

Marcel

Marcel rubbed his elbow where he had fallen, grinning like a cheshire cat and standing on the game sidelines. He caught a few lines of an interesting conversation. A girl, holding a notebook and pencil lile some kind of reporter, was talking to a student.

The girl…[Read more]

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Was this boy a lunatic? Wilhelm tried to draw his dagger

XD That’s the perfect reaction

This character is sort of shallow but really wants to help out new students, so he’s very useful when we need him

Remington

“I am Remington LaCreux. You may call me Remington. Just Remington.” The young man’s expression softened. Poor Wilhe…[Read more]

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intense suavety

That’s a pretty good choice of words, I must say

Remington

Remington brandished his free arm in the air, his excessively laced sleeve waving about. His jacket, also laced, was cobweb gray, and helped him blend in when he needed to. It was also fashionable. That, the holy aim of all clothing, had no choice but to…[Read more]

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Wren

That was what she expected. Up to this point, the answers seemed the same as all the ones she got from other students. But now she had come to her last and biggest question. For the first time in the interview, Wren looked up from her notebook. She looked her interviewee dead in the eye, determined to get an honest…[Read more]

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Wren

Wren’s face remained serious and focused as she nodded. She made no noticeable reaction to the ball hitting the bleachers, but did write a full description of the moment down in her notebook in shorthand. She continued with her next question.

“Have you and your classmates been trained by the staff in safety procedures in…[Read more]

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For context, this character is basically this roleplay’s version of an NPC. That’s not the right word, but I can’t be bothered to think of a better one. 😛 He’s part of the world itself and isn’t from any of my stories.

Remington

It was a fine night for a student to explore the school grounds by himself – which was exactly w…[Read more]

@keilah-h hiii!!

@elishavet-pidyon awesome because I’ve actually been thinking about what to do when I reach the stage of beta readers and such and im like “what do I doooo” 😂

@koshka ooh I wanna hear about it (but also hope u eventually go back to the twins. I love my boysss 🤣)

I’m posting here to knock this back up to the top of the forum. It’s been little while, but I think we have a good setup if anyone feels like continuing the story. 🙃

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Sorry to leave Wilhelm hanging! This must be remedied

@koshka @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon HIII!!! Omg it feels like forever (I guess it has been lol!)

so good to hear about your works!!

Elishavet- yup! It’s the first destined book! And it’s just like the first draft I’ve ever truly “finished” like there are still scenes needing to be added and stuff, but it’s mostly cohesive.…[Read more]

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Alrighty Y’all! Time for answers.

1. Elizabeth, Pride and Prejudice

2. Edmund, Prince Caspian, Narnia

3. Aragorn, The Fellowship of the Ring, LotR

4. Francis, Men of Iron

5. Halt, The Ruins of Gorlan, Rangers Apprentice

6. A Feechie, Secret of the Swamp King, Wilder King…[Read more]