@elishavet-pidyon
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
😂
Marcel
“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”
Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.They…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I love how the writer is confused when things don’t go exactly the way she tried to write it lol
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon General science
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group
@everyone
I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes actual killing please.
lol no I’m actually serious. This isn’t the rp for that.
@elishavet-pidyon Yeah Hugo caught back up with them. He was only gone for like a minute. I’m not sure what to write for that group rn, sorry.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Help on writing an impactful last day in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
First off, funny forum signature.
*bows* Thank you.
Second, what are the ages of your characters?
The character who knows she’s about to die is about 18, as is her best friend. Her grandfather is 70ish. Her grandfather and best friend are the only ones who know.
It also depends on if they’re Christians or not.
They are not at the moment. I s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I LOVE THIS!!!
Now go write more! Now!
🤣
I must know what happens!!!! *sob*
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Middle-grade fiction ideas needed!!! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Biblical gender identity because that’s the world we live in.
I would say keep any gender issues out of MG. I was reading MG at 7ish, and my parents never told me about any of that stuff until I was a teen. Finding out about it, even from a Biblical perspective, would have traumatized tiny me.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I have wanted to rant on Ranger brilliance for months. But sometimes we writers just have to rant to our pillows.
Lolol.
Great section!
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
and the rest of the main part of the Baumann fam (also in the 1928 story🤭)
From left to right:
Top: Hans, Eleanor, Himmler (Hans/Felix’s younger brother)
Bottom: Johann, Arndt, Lee (Hans/Ele…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol
part of the Baumann fam in 1928 (the year Felix/Frida got married…and the year that I’m setting a new for fun short story in🤭👀)
From left to right:
Top: Felix, Frida, Adolphus, Dietrich
Bottom: Leo,…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
A secret squirrel kingdom deep in the heart of the oldest woods? A band of exiles with unknown crimes in their pasts? I am intrigued.
YAY! I had a good idea!
It’s redundant to say the squirrels are good at hiding twice. It made this bit feel like it was going in circles, which is sad because it’s an important part of that int…
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@grcr @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon
Oohh, okay. Elishavet has a good idea. We could always try for a Friday afternoon instead of Saturday morning. Maybe I should set up a poll.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theshadow @grcr @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h (Is this something you would be interested in? I can’t remember if you responded.) @stephie @trailblazer @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @i’m-sure-i-forgot-someone-so-consider-yourself-tagged-sorry!
I’m thinking about plann…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic What are your most influential childhood books? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
Ooh, fun topic!
Narnia is one of the first chapter books I can remember reading. I love those books so much.
They’re a story that grows with you as you grow up.
Absolutely, 100%. I didn’t really get into other classics until I was older though.
When I was pretty young (8-10 years old) I really enjoyed mysteries like the Box…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The answer is “no.”
Gasp! How did you know?! lol
@whalekeeper @theducktator @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon
Mateo
Mateo looked at his friend with a quizzical look and shook his head. “Never heard of it. Is it a place where you fight? Blow stuff up? … Play music.” Mateo then started to play a happy Mexican melody.
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Ruth replied to the topic A Narrative of the Squirrels and the Ducks in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@liberty @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
You write animal stories, right? (If I tagged the wrong people by accident, sorry)
This seems like your forte.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle
Here is my next board! What do you think? Any thoughts about Kyler?

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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@raxforge @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin
XD Oh Andrew, I forgot to tell you it will be a Foreign Cultures study.
Marcel
Hugo brushed himself off and strode briskly away, probably to join his original group. He was, for the most part, unperturbed – aside from looking paler than usual.
“How…“ Marcel shook his confusion off. He rubbe…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loppylin
Mateo is probably one of my favorite charries only for the fact that he’s a anti-hero/villain who plays guitar and blows stuff up XD
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