Elishavet Elroi

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

Here’s the enxt board! What do you think of this fellow?

Hey! Is anyone on? @keilah-h @loopylin @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else XD

@elishavet-pidyon

No problem!

As far as I can remember, the story went like this:

It was after the train crash. Susan had heard the news and was devastated. The loss of her entire family brought a new light into her narrowed vision. I think she was sitting in front of a mirror in her room. You read mentions of the path of her…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Lois

Lois sat down at a desk in between Hugo and Victor, and the teacher resumed her lesson. Hugo pushed his science textbook to the edge of his desk so both he and Lois could see. Today, the class was starting by reviewing the periodic table, which had a lot more elements than Lois remembered from his previous…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

You have a good point. I always like it when books flip gender stereotypes without being weird about it. I read a book once where one of the MCs, a knight, enjoyed knitting. He was still a man, he just knit stuff.

@elishavet-pidyon lol

@whalekeeper @koshka @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @trailblazer @theducktator @grcr @theshadow

Y’all are so so so helpful!!! I wish I could reply to each individual response, but that would take a while. 🤪

The theme I’m getting from most of the responses though is that MG needs more wholesomeness, or at least that was what you enjoyed the mos…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

thanks!!!!

@raxforge @theducktator

😂

Marcel

“Hey, hey, hey!” Marcel separated the two with a guarding hand. “We will not kill anybody. And I will not allow unnecessary attacks. Do you both understand?”

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

Hugo
The group passed the lobby bar. Hugo stopped to grab Victor and Lois cups of hot chocolate, and to grab a thermos.

They…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon I love how the writer is confused when things don’t go exactly the way she tried to write it lol

@elishavet-pidyon General science

@elishavet-pidyon

Yeah, Hugo ran back to our group

@everyone

I want to update Marcel/Mateo/Celarent in a bit, but I am at a Southeast-wide presbytery meeting, and right now, my only purpose in life is to refill food and water pitchers for everybody. It’s worth it. XD But due to my responsibilities, please wait for me to proceed.

@ellette-giselle

Yes actual killing please.

lol no I’m actually serious. This isn’t the rp for that.

@elishavet-pidyon Yeah Hugo caught back up with them. He was only gone for like a minute. I’m not sure what to write for that group rn, sorry.

@rae

First off, funny forum signature.

*bows* Thank you.

Second, what are the ages of your characters?

The character who knows she’s about to die is about 18, as is her best friend. Her grandfather is 70ish. Her grandfather and best friend are the only ones who know.

It also depends on if they’re Christians or not.

They are not at the moment. I s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

I LOVE THIS!!!

Now go write more! Now!

🤣

I must know what happens!!!! *sob*

@elishavet-pidyon

Biblical gender identity because that’s the world we live in.

I would say keep any gender issues out of MG. I was reading MG at 7ish, and my parents never told me about any of that stuff until I was a teen. Finding out about it, even from a Biblical perspective, would have traumatized tiny me.

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

I have wanted to rant on Ranger brilliance for months. But sometimes we writers just have to rant to our pillows.

Lolol.

Great section!

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

and the rest of the main part of the Baumann fam (also in the 1928 story🤭)

From left to right:

Top: Hans, Eleanor, Himmler (Hans/Felix’s younger brother)

Bottom: Johann, Arndt, Lee (Hans/Ele…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @ellette-giselle @rae @keilah-h @smiley @theducktator @grcr @godlyfantasy12 @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

part of the Baumann fam in 1928 (the year Felix/Frida got married…and the year that I’m setting a new for fun short story in🤭👀)

From left to right:

Top: Felix, Frida, Adolphus, Dietrich

Bottom: Leo,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

A secret squirrel kingdom deep in the heart of the oldest woods? A band of exiles with unknown crimes in their pasts? I am intrigued.

YAY! I had a good idea!

It’s redundant to say the squirrels are good at hiding twice. It made this bit feel like it was going in circles, which is sad because it’s an important part of that int…

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