Elishavet Elroi

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
September 5th      
The Empire

We have continued to spread the word of God in the streets, in the square, and to those we meet. We are rising again, and the en…

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HI Y’ALL!!!

NO, I’M NOT DEAD. (Contrary to popular belief 😂)

I just had the most WILD week. Why does everyone want to graduate in the same week?!?! And why throw wedding stuff into that same week?!?!

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I’m sorry I completely abandoned this topic. School got really busy right after I made it, but it’s done now.

@elishavet-pidyon

Dragon Slippers was a fun story… But not only did the “Christian-ish” religion feel very polytheistic, but it was often irreverent. The “Tri-Unity” was mainly presented as powerless, without any guiding hand in what happ…

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It was late into the evening before the meeting finally broke up. Julian’s words had shaken the little church, and they were ready and open to hear more. As Leon and Julian took turns speaking to them and en…

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The next morning after breakfast, Julian and Leon began making their way along the streets looking for the homes of the three men they had left to lead the church: Konner Krüger, Reinhold Meier, and Fox Keller.…

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(btw, there was a short section before this that only Hybridlore commented on, and I’m not sure if the rest of you got tagged. I’ve been told tags are acting up.)

Julian and Leon stayed in Clonabay for two week…

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Imma up the prize to two different character drawings. Might regret this later.

(@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon )

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*Tumbles in through the window*

Hi y’all! So, Project Gold Heart (aka the series Zlati and Vulka are in) has been renamed and is currently being drafted (Lord willing and I don’t dump this by June)

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Sorry this is so short. Bridal shower and 3 graduation parties……… plus more. It’s a crazy day……..

The next morning, Leon and Julian enjoyed a hearty breakfast with Amarin, Adeline, and Andreas.

“Ho…

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
June 17th      
The Empire

We’ve been traveling for two days now. No sign of soldiers, thank God. The closer I get the stronger I feel that this is indeed what Go…

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It’s my sister’s birthday so I probably won’t post today.

@whalekeeper

Extra challenge: don’t pull the sadness from a super abusive or traumatic experience.

Eh, I’ll allow it, but I guarantee you it won’t make me feel anything.

@elishavet-pidyon

Yay! Someone willing to take the challenge! XD

I get emotional at movies and also cry myself to sleep occasionally so it shouldn’t be too hard, probably.

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“They’re back!” yelled a child’s voice.

Leon scrambled to his feet and ran for the entrance to the cave. Roland, Liesl and several others followed. They stepped out into the evening light just in time to see the hunt…

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@elishavet-pidyon
Thank you! And I’m glad the examples made sense to someone besides me. The characters must be protected not only for themselves, but for the sake of story legacy. ⚔️

@loopylin

Too hesitant to kill off characters who probably should actually die for the plot/ their own arc.

Some people are definitely more like that. I fall…[Read more]

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I have a friend who is in an art school right now and it’s been really interesting talking to her, because all of her art pieces have literally been inspired by dreams or other ideas God has given to her, and they all have some sort of revelation or message in them, and she’s been able to have a lot of good conversations with…[Read more]

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“We need more meat,” Rolf said. He and several others were sitting about in the main cavern, eating breakfast.

“Are we running low again?” Julian asked.

“Yes, and we’ve hunted this area clean.”

“Then let’s pla…

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@keilah-h

He’s the spiritual one, the one that’s always reminding the other characters to trust God or to appreciate their surroundings. He loves animals and plants and being out in nature. He’s also athletic.

Spot on!

(and don’t worry, calling adult or near adult male characters “boy” is a common thing among writers)

Have you ever seen people…[Read more]

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The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 31st      
The Empire

It is growing dark. I am sitting beside Leon, who is tossing in fevered sleep. Last night we were attacked by wolves, and several of us w…

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@elishavet-pidyon I’m glad you like it. And it means so much that other historical fictions make you think of my characters😭🫶

Note: I haven’t killed them in my head cannons yet. I leave that to the resident author who shall remain nameless, Ellette.

Nah, I haven’t killed any of them in my mind because I don’t think…

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Yay! I signed up for CEW too!

Ellette, what do you mean by saying everything in your world changes today?

Also, Whalekeeper, please tag me to the goal writing topic! I may join for that as well!