@elishavet-pidyon
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h
November
Vulkasin had scaled the tower with ease. His height was definitely an advantage here.
His nerves were now completely shot at the thought of having to climb this tower. Not only because he was afraid of falling and obviously hurting himself, but also embarrassing himself immensely in…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Blackened stonework, narrow threshold, tall glorious window. The tower at last.
But everyone seemed concerned on how to enter, all gathered round the refuse pile of a door.
Whatever they were trying to do. He had found the window.
It wasn’t high; stretching he could almost…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon YAAAAY SOMEONE IS ON 😭 I’ve been wanting to do writing stuff…but didn’t want to be alone if that makes any sense at all…writing is a lonely work sometimes… but no one was on the RP!!
now I can RP at least once 😂
November
Viktor had led the group back outside and to the court near the tower. November rubbed his arms, look…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Wowsers y’all. That was a lot more than I expected.
Sorry for not getting on. I try to stay off my phone on weekends.
OH, and @freedomwriter76 ? Michael and Mikkel definitely need to meet, both being marines (although Mikkel would be like ‘Sorry chap, I’m a King’s Mariner’).
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Pen_for_Christ205 started the topic Please Help Me Steer A Conversion Conversation in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, y’all!
I need a character to help another come to Christ. These are always really hard for me, so your help would be very appreciated.
So the character who needs to come to Christ is named Thorald (for now). He’s a villain and he’s done much to hurt Richard (the guy who’s trying to convert him). He hurt both him and his fiance A LOT and…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon heeey u on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Still not sure what to RP at this point isn’t time…
someone wanna get us moving to the sleeping quarters? Maybe one of the guys can carry Franz?
OH maybe Keilah’s new character is at the sleeping area??? In that tower or whatever and that’s where we find him? Just spitting out ide…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 Yes! Honestly, I’m going to do it now. Jareth’s probably going to wander alone for a little while before he finds the group. Also he has his pet with him–a little creature of my brother’s creation called Crowshadow, or Crow for short cause he’s black.
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 Adding a new character who will…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @freedomwriter76
Yep, those three characters sound good! It’s gonna be awkward though when Crosshair tells Eva she reminds him of Feather (his wife)……they don’t look similar but I kind of feel like they’d get along.
Crosshair
Riker’s father snapped some particularly harsh words…..and slapped his…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76 soooo I actually dunno what to RP rn lol…anyone wanna go?
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Koshka replied to the topic Why write clean? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 8 months ago
Exactly! The Bible shows many disturbing things, and that is exactly what they should be. Disturbing, NOT intriguing.
Our writing should show the darkness as what it is, both to give boldness because we know our enemy, and a warning to not be like it.
It matters where your focus is. Remember Lot’s wife? Although her feet were…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
Riker was kneeling beside his father, white faced. His eyes. So like…
He should never have let this happen. Should never have let his instincts take over.
Never lost control.
Zlatan closed his eyes.
Zlatan, hey, stay here. Don’t get lost in your head.
Blink. Was that h…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
November
Riker had pulled away, leaving November feeling a bit cold, though he wasn’t about to say anything. He knelt by his father, pleading with him. November frowned in concern, his heart twisting in empathy. He could definitely understand where Riker was coming from.
What if it was R…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
The man looked bad, but the only blood was bright, none of the dark kind Mikkel knew to look for.
He stepped away from Eva, his hands already digging out his kit.
“Riker, please lay him flat on his back.” He knelt beside him. “Does anyone have water? I’m almost out.”
The…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
Jocelyn & Nyx
Nyx made his way off of Franz’s limp body, his fur covered in a blood that wasn’t his own. He hissed, even though the man was no longer conscious.
“Nyx!” Lyn’s voice made his ears twitch. He turned towards her as she approached slowly.
Everyone seemed a bit…shaken at Franz’s…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
For a moment silence reigned.
Mikkel blinked.
“Poor fellow. Pity he underestimated his enemy.”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon no he wouldn’t XD
*pulls Nyx into strangle hug as he squirms to get out of it.*
”LET ME GO!”
NEVER!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
So everyone is going at Franz now XD, so how bout we say it’s kinda free for all, and now Franz is unconscious on the ground, thx to all three guys (Zlatan, Nyx and Viktor XD)
and Arabella certainly have him a good talking to that’s for sure. She probably would’ve slapped him to if she’d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Zlatan
White hot fury.
Freezing passion.
Smell of blood.
The world went red.
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He blinked. Franz was on the floor before him.
“I’m sorry.”
He was breathing, a large knot forming over his temple. Thank the Maker, he wasn’t killed.
Riker looker up his eyes wide.
“I’m sorry.”
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
POOR RIKER 😭 FRANZ HOW DARE YOU!
Arabella
”NOVEMBER!” Ara screamed as the man raised his fist. November froze and Ara’s heart plummeted.
“No!” Riker moved, shielding November from the blow and taking it instead. Blood sprouted from his jaw and Ara gasped, tears streaming down her face.
Wa…[Read more]
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