@elishavet-pidyon
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Queen_of_Alvastia replied to the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon Thank you guys!! <3 Pretty much what happened is Payton is having an attitude towards Nathan….XDXD
*sorry Nathan*
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Queen_of_Alvastia started the topic WIP scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @drawing a blank *sorry guys* *sigh* @anyone-else-reading-this
Thoughts? Changes? Edits? XD
Payton sent one of his pieces of kindling rolling towards Nathan with a well-aimed kick.
“So,” he drawled with a careless attitude, “You think you can fool us all by starting to help out now t…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP; a character is running away with the pen!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Oooh this sounds so incredible first off!! You’ve already done AMAZING stuff so far!! Ugh 😭!
So, honestly it’s a little hard for me to actually give advice BUT I can say that I have a character very similar to this in my own series.
She’s not a mother, or “abusive” or even an adult for the first part of the series.…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 3 years, 8 months ago
SOOO apparently this is where you go for stubborn scenes lol!!
AND I know I’ve already posted a question for help with an injury, well I’ve kinda gotten some help online with that so…but anymore help in that thread I’d appreciate as well, also feel free to ask ur own questions and such.
ANYWAY!! I am rlly trying to write because it’s be…[Read more]
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Lydia S. started the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Hey, ya’ll!
Lydia, here. 🙂 So, I thought it’d be fun to start an inspiration exchange thread!
This is a place where we can all dump interesting photos or dialog prompts we happen to find or come up with, and it’s also somewhere where we can resort to if we need inspiration! Post as many prompts/pictures as you’d like, but please make sure they…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)
SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Oh, by the way, Jareth can talk to Crow sorta the way Jocelyn can talk to Nyx, but it’s not telepathic. Also, Crow doesn’t have feathers, he has spikes and scales. The drawing says “As drawn by Feather” because that’s the name of the character who drew it in the story (she’s Jareth’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….Well…
Everyone else.
It was….strange….
And November didn’t fully grasp it.
Per…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.
The barrack…
Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.
The cross piece and pommel on his sword.
Why did I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Riker’s kind gaze and sincere words calmed November’s nerves and he let out a breath. He nodded. “Ah…I-I’m good, thanks…” November warily watched Franz out of the corner of his eyes. “Are…are you okay?”
Arabella
The little boy seemed a bit skittish still, and he was clutching his…l…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h anyone on and wanna RP?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon
Jocelyn
As soon as the sound reached her ears, Lyn knew….
She bolted from her sleeping spot and found herself towering above the two fighting creatures. Nearby was Naja, behind held by Alyona, and another child, a boy Lyn hadn’t seen before.
He looked extremely frightened by everyone aro…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Just going to do Jareth’s POV for now.
Jareth
“I’m Naja!” said the girl who’d found him. “What’s your name?”
“Jareth,” he said, but she didn’t seem to pay attention and was instead focused on Crow.
“Your puppy! He’s cute!”
Crow squirmed, indignant at being called a puppy, but Jareth…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
AWWW NAJA’s POV IS ADORABLE!!!!!
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
November
November heard Crosshair speak gruffly to someone. His ears were still a bit stuffy from just waking up, and he yawned, rubbing the sleep from his eyes.
What was wrong with him?
November sat up and his blood ran cold as he spotted Franz, who was n…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Trauma club! I’m in, and so are most of my charries! I sorta like chopping characters’ arms off….Or blinding/half-blinding them…..You get the idea…..
Luckily for them and for you, Jareth and Crosshair haven’t gotten really mutilated yet. Unless you count the time Crosshair was…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 anyone wanna rp?
ik u did Koshka but as Zlatan or Vulkasin?? Idk lol
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Mikkel
Rat-tat-tat
Screams, loud garbled voices. Zeroing in on his target, safety off.
Another kick shatters the door. Three more steps.
His feet pound down the stairs, racing against time. Flames snatch at his legs, slowing him down.
Another door swings open sending a stream of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
oof, question-
Franz….will probably wake up when the rest of them wake up….right?
also, it might be fun if the girls actually discover @keilah-h new character, while the guys are dealing with the newly awoken Franz.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @koshka anyone wanna RP? keilah isn’t till something interesting happens.
one of y’all wanna discover her new Charrie?? When they wake up or something lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Soooo @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
anyone on? Ik it’s late soooo….
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