Jaybird

@hybridlore

Ugh. I want to shake that kid. Or get Jim.Why do my character gotta do dumb things!!! *sob*

Wait what? Huh. I guess. idk, I feel like I made it pretty clear….

Yes!! I love that chapter!!!

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NEXT CHAPTERS!!!

20-21!!!

@elishavet-pidyon

I decided I loved it when Kyler sent Jace flying into the mystery visitor. XD

😂 Yay!

There were several places where either the syntax or word choice made the little reading voice in my head stumble, so I’ll come back and note those,

Great! I will look forward to those. I actually went over the doc and changed some of those t…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

😆 I’m excited to hear what you say!

Don’t worry…I sometimes miss things too.

@hybridlore

Oh. Duh.

I was thinking in response to Jonathan falling. I didn’t even think of the other chapter.

@hybridlore

What?!?! But Rick is so sweet and nice!!

*stares at you with total deadpan face*

Poor Jim? Why poor Jim?

Thanks so much!

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18-19

@jonas

Awesome! What do I do with my outline now that it’s written? Do you want it submitted somewhere?

@theducktator

No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.

Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.

@keilah-h

Probably Don.

I love him so much.

@hybridlore

…. and then he got pushed off a building.

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PART 2

@hybridlore

The question is…. is that good or bad? 🤣

@keilah-h

perfect!

@keilah-h

No problem.

I’m guessing that means you just read the chapters? Or did you not get to it yet?

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CHAPTERs 14-15!!!!!!!

And apparently our water heater is messed up too? 😭

Couple things that I’d appreciated y’all’s prayers for…

First, my volleyball tryouts are tomorrow!! A little nervous about that. Just pray that I’d do my best and stay humble.

Also our AC unit is acting up. 😖 And it’s annoying cuz we kinda need AC and we had to fix our furnace this past winter bc it broke down. So prayers for patience and…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I know! Poor guy!

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Chapters 12-13!!!!