Jaybird

@freedomwriter76

*Deep shaky breath*

I was pretty sure this was going to happen.

*Sniff*

It’s okay.

I’ve been considering killing Wilkins, but y’all didn’t hear that so…

Hehe…

@godlyfantasy12

*Stares for a moment in stunned silence*

WHAT!?! Nooooooooo……..

What about Nyx?!? What is HE going to do?

Wwwhhyyyyy!!??!

Actually, now I’m curious. Why?

@godlyfantasy12

YES, do tell!

But to make us even, then yes I do have at least one I’ve got figured out, and an almost death.

And none of y’all actually know either of these characters like at all, but anyway.

So, I vaguely referred to this in the RP, but Mikkel has a close, close friend named Oswald who’s the medic for his group in the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

*Staggers back from hooded figure, then rushes forward on bended knee*

“Don’t touch November-Ara-Paxton-Grim-or Luna! PLEASE!!!!”

*Settles back into seat.*

“But, please, do tell.”

@whalekeeper

I hope this will be helpful…

• Loosely plot your book out on note cards, with about how much time in the storyline you think that section should take.
• If things are going to fast, step back and  try writing a character point by point through a scene. Add some description or dialogue.
• If they’re going too slow, look for…

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@whalekeeper

Yep, I’m doubled. =) If you ever have any questions, I can try to answer. (Within reason, of course)

@koshka

Thank you anyway 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Would you like to go? =)

@godlyfantasy12

Not exactly. Can we assume my characters get to the top of the window with little incident, and pick as Mikkel steps through the window?

@godlyfantasy12

They’re adorable!

Btw, I may wish to drop another character in here soon, but not till the group kind of shrinks a bit. She’s actually from a novel I haven’t talked a lot about, as it’s not my main WIP. Anyway, all the lovely pics brought her back to mind.

Yes, please do!

Ah well…*sniffle*

@godlyfantasy12

I’m on. =)

@freedomwriter76

I actually can’t think of anything in particular to put, that may be helpful, as I don’t know what you want advice on. But if you have a question, now or later, feel free to ask!

And I’ll probably fill an entire page with my rambles.

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Oops. I didn’t intend to tag everyone. I have tag lists saved on my copy/paste thing, which normally works out fine, except when I hit the wrong one.

Like just now.

Oh well.

@godlyfantasy12

Ah, well I’m an identical, so writing a fraternal set has been an adventure.

(Wow, I’m not sure of my favorite, but…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Yeah, it can be difficult. I’m steering clear myself.

OH the TWINS! I almost forgot.

Have you ever written twins before?

@freedomwriter76

Good! That does make a big difference in the layout.

Exactly. I’ve seen it used well (Narnia, Wingfeather) and I’ve seen it otherwise (let’s not go there). It’s a tool in writing that needs a lot of control, if that makes sense.

What I call True Fantasy; not exactly an allegory, but still a parable of sorts. A tale of truth…[Read more]

Alsooooo…hehe…

Interesting pictures…

(Also, do you know the Russian is the top left corner on the first picture means On the Edge? It’s making me wonder what that means.)

@freedomwriter76

Welcome to this side of the Kingdom! *Hands you a slice of cream pie*

Ooo, True Fantasy! (Or at least that’s what I call it)

It sounds good. Is it still a romance, or is that now a subplot? Is there magic in this world?

Also, do you need any help with anything?

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Zlatan

Novembré nearly fell, but was snatched through the window instead.

Thank the Maker.

Zlatan glanced around the group. Vulk was bouncing on the balls of his feet.

He sighed. “Go on.”

Vulkasin flashed up and in, ignoring the rope. Which was probably a good thing…

“Now,…[Read more]