Elishavet Elroi

@grcr

Ahh! So cute! Especially the blonde! She is adorable!

@whalekeeper

Ahhhhh, he’s adorable.

*Melts*

@savannah_grace2009

*Sending hugs*

We’ll be praying for y’all.

Three kids with emotional problems have to shut down the black market for exploding eggs.

Two peasants reconcile a kingdom in civil war by deciding their uncle can drown.

Gracious, but this is beautiful.

@loopylin

*Blink*

The cat. I just… that’s perfection.

@hybridlore

awesome!

@linus-smallprint

Nooooo! I am losing my only guy feedback person! 😱

I understand that though.

A World War II spy story!

Funny you say that….. I currently am writing a WWII spy story. F.O.S. But no, this is not WWII.

@hybridlore

I plan on starting asap if I’m to get two books rewritten, edited, formatted, and printed by…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Um, yes?!? There is a great lacking of clean distopian fiction, much less christian. These book mat need work, but they’re good, and I definitely want to see them on shelves.

I can use either, but if you want editing, it might be easier for me to use email? Idk. We’ll see. If I did use email, I would probably just be sending my…[Read more]

@koshka

Really?! Ah yay!!!

Wait, you think it needs to be published?! Woah!

Okay, so you’re saying you’ll only give feedback in email, not KP? Or did I misunderstand that completely?

@ellette-giselle

You know I’m more than happy to help with these books…*glances nervously around*

*Turns up the radio to drown out any bugs*

I’m with your brothers on this one. It needs published.

You pick how heavy I critique/edit. You’ve seen what I do over email. And I’ll probably stick with email, now that I’ve got a…[Read more]

@jonas

Okay…… I put yes…. but that honestly depends on what kind of time I have. I may have to drop back to feedback…. or nothing.

@hybridlore

Wait really!!!!

*jumps around cheering*

Yahoo!!!!

@keilah-h

Oh, I write all of the above plus some. idk. The MC is a teenage guy in most of it, but then so were Joseph and Aaron. 🤷🏼‍♀️

@keilah-h

Aw thank you so much!!! I can’t wait. Yay! One member has joined the team!

What do your brothers love so much about it?

I hope you can discover that, because I don’t know…………

@hybridlore    @keilah-h

Thank you, thank you, thank you very much. *twirls hat dramatically because for some reason that is the mental image I have* Feedback like this is always super helpful.

In answer to Hybrid’s question, this book is about the length of the first one with the middle two being the longest. I just submitted really bi…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

QUESTIONS!

Characters:

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do tha…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I will. It’ll be a bit odd this time because I feel like I already asked most of them on LOS. I should have a few though.

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!! Linus saves the day. Why didn’t I think of that with Flavia? 🤦🏼‍♀️

Good. Good. I’m glad the time skip works.

The person was an acolyte of the priests who saw what happened.

Thank you for sharing your series with us! If I remember correctly, it was just about a year ago that you started posting the first book…

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@hybridlore

Okay, I only got one.

idk if you saw my email, but it won’t let me past your safety measures.