Jaybird

@mineralizedwritings

Oh thanks! I’m so glad you like Lesli and Tauren!

You’re sooo welcome!! yes! they’re so Good!! 😀

I’m really savoring everything about how living underground is different, because they don’t know anything different….or do they? 🤨

Okay! Ooh mysterious… XD.

Anyways, 😂

It just y’know.. has to do with future thingys 😉…

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@felicity

Oh, I really like this!! I love the set up of their home and family life.

Just wondering, how far into the Russo-Ukranian war is it? From what I understand, is it just beginning?

Yeah, @mineralizedwritings tip about changing up the action words with ing and no ing could help the story flow a little better.

Anyway, I loved it! Can’t…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! 😊 He’s kinda my favorite.

You’re welcome! Yeah, I can tell :).

…but don’t tell Ed and El. I’d like to keep my life XD

Oh yes! ! don’t want to lose a new friend! I won’t tell. XD

@loopylin

Thank you! Okay, I thought so. I really like Dante’s character! He’s very intriguing. I love his personality!!

@freedomwriter76

OH my gosh!! My heart!! RIKER!! it’s not your fault baby!! Not at all!!!

AND LEON AND ADELHIEDE!!! My goodness! Your sweet charries. LOVE THEM SO MUCH!!

UGH HANS!!!! YOU BETTER WATCH YOURSELF…

Girl!!! You did great on showing their feelings and overall reaction!! I mean, it’s heartbreaking, but you did a great job making my…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

AHHH!!! Thank y’all for all the kind words!!! <333

You’re so welcome, sweet friend!!!! 😀 🙂 <3 <3

And y’all…because of all of y’all’s encouragement, I’ve officially reached 37 pages in my draft of this book.

Thank y’all so much. 😭

Oh my goodness!!! That’s awesome!! You ARE SO WELCOME GIRL!! I’m so glad we were able to help encou…[Read more]

@loopylin

Oh, I’m so sorry!! I’m just rocking the ‘mistaking someones character for another’ thing this month XD, right @mineralizedwritings ? XD.

For some reason, I thought Kad was your character i guess bc he’s in the group with Eddie and Ellie (Those are your charries right?) and Dante and Rueben and others.

You can probably just ignore my…

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@freedomwriter76

YES. The worst thing we could do would be to forget. I agree that it does need written about, and I am certainly still waiting for more. Just…*sigh*

Mwahaha… character conflict.

Ooo! I can’t wait!

@freedomwriter76

…and now we enter the reason I don’t typically study WWII.

@loopylin

Okay! Good ideas! Kad, you mean?

@felicity

TOTALLY!!!!

YES!! XD

Ok I will. 🙂

Hehe…your story is so cute. I love how…

The puppie’s parents were not sweet to them and they died. Heavenly Father killed the parents because they were mean to their children.
That’s so good!!! 😀

Yay!! I just read the 2nd chapter, and it’s so cute!! That’s actually really good for 10-11! I’m gonna g…[Read more]

*gasp*

I’m an eccentric mentor!?

*Starts to throw confetti*

Waaiiittttt….

*Lowers confetti*

What exactly does that mean?

@godlyfantasy12

And you do a lovely job of it too! XD

@freedomwriter76

Ugh! I. Despise. Hans.

That was so good! I love all the history stuff, even though, to be honest, I usually don’t research WWII often. I do love this though, and….ahhhh….

This is totally making me want to dig Promise of Zion out again. XD

@godlyfantasy12

AHHHHHH!!!! Just don’t look to closely, alright?

Hmm, I guess you could dictate out loud.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah but – *shhhh!* Don’t tell her the rest!

@godlyfantasy12

She has auburn/red hair (a little more red than auburn though), and leaf green with amber and blue flecks.

Do I obsess over my character’s eyes? Maybe a little. XD

@godlyfantasy12

Hehehe….*whispers*

“She’s figured us out!”

Yes, we definitely know each other in real life.

@godlyfantasy12

XD XD XD

Aplets and Cotlets! Little candies similar to Turkish Delights, but made from apples, pears, or apricots, and assorted tree nuts. Or no nuts, it depends on the variety.