Jaybird

@wilder-w @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon  @godlyfantasy12

Question: Should Almarrin drive an old car, or a vehicle strangely remenecent of a humvee?

Almarrin

For a second he stared at the name, memorizing each letter. Then he made sure Hope was comfortable on the bench outside the nurse’s office. It was dark inside; apparently the nurse h…[Read more]

@sarafini

That works! You can go ahead and write a RP if you’d like. I may not be able to write more tonight, but I will be able to tomorrow for sure!

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-piyon @keilah-h @sarafini @wilder-w

Ok! Here’s the RP. This is the morning of the third day. I’ll have my charries bump into someone or something like that and any of y’all can choose which one of your characters it is. First come first serve. 😁

Amidala

Amidala marched up the steps of the s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah! I love Ami’s family too! I don’t like Ev’s family very much, as well. Well, at least his parents. They’re kind of terrible, but they all have to work some things out. Asher is a very mysterious character, I’ve found, so I’m still trying to understand him.

Lukas is my cinnamon roll, tho! 😊 His name means “brings lig…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @wilder-w

Hello!! So, before I write my RP, quick question: How many days have passed since the start of school?

@freedomwriter76

I remember you said that you already love Ev. So here’s his story!! 😄

@sarafini

You can start a thread with that question. Just press the community tab and choose the forum under which you want to put it. Then somewhere at the top there should be an option to “Create Topic”. I think that’s right.

@sarafini

Oh, yes. You’re not wrong. I suppose it just depends how often it’s used.

@whalekeeper

*nods head slightly* You as well. 😁 (You’re a throne warden, am I right?)

It did. It should get better, though… I hope 😜

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much for the feedback! Super helpful! I’ve noticed that I do need to work on dialogue and character interaction more.

Hey!!

I LOVE WFS!!!

I would be a High Queen! 👑 And I think my older bro would make a great Throne Warden. My younger siblings wouldn’t quite fit their titles. Lol

I have watched the first episode and it is pretty good! It maybe could’ve been better, but I think it’s worth the watch. Can’t wait for the next one(s)!

@sarafini

Gotcha 😉 I probably need more critique on my work anyway. I’ve only read it to a few of my cousins and my two younger siblings, so it’s always nice to get some critique that isn’t all positive bc it grows me as a writer and just as a person, tbh. 🙂

@sarafini

Yes! There are many ways to retell a fairytale without manic. In fact, one of my favorite Cinderella retellings is based in a non-magical fantasy world. Fairytales aren’t about magic, even the slightly out there ones like Goose girl. Instead of using fairies or other magical people’s you can use real people. Stories told this way can…[Read more]

@arien

I love your new tag. Amen! It reminds me of this quote from The Warden and the Wolf King by Andrew Peterson.

Thank you! A wise friend said that once.

“We face the enemy with steady hearts, for Dawn has conquered Dark since the Maker spoke the world. The night is deep, but light runs deeper.”

I LOVE that quote!! The Florid Sword said that…[Read more]

By the way, if you guys think anyone else would want to read it, please tag them. I may have forgotten some people 😅

Now for the first 2 chapters!!!

Chapter 1

Amidala Nadir frowned. Something wasn’t quite right. She dipped her paintbrush in the pink paint and dabbed the canvas with the paint. She smiled. Perfect. She placed her painting supplies to the side and admired the flowers.

Pink roses… her favorite. They reminded her of hope. She peeked out the win…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

First of all: Hi!! Don’t think I’ve met you yet. 😀

And to answer your question. I don’t think I can write out of order. Like, it would mess with me. There are always scenes that I’m really excited to write and I replay them in my head, but I just keep writing until I get to it.

@felicity

I love that!! My favorite characters from LotR are Sam, Legolas, and Aragorn.