Elishavet Elroi

@hybridlore   @keilah-h

ooo! This is good!! I like this! I know for sure who it is, and to several of them that actually happens. (Though not an orange rock. 😝)

Michael would take the jump for Jonathan

Ron for Michael

Michael for James with the argument that James is the second in command and needs to stay. Still, James would do it if he…[Read more]

@rae

yes, I’ll be praying for him!

@theducktator

praying.

also, to everyone, I’ve tried subscribing to this topic but it’s rare I get notifications. Just know that I try to check this when it comes to mind. I’m gonna try unsubscribing and subscribing again to see if that helps.

@power

hey! Sorry, I’ve been out of town and just saw this.

so in the chapter I mentioned that they fueled the plane up with the fuel in the fuel truck that was with the transport. The plane wasn’t being flown over because it was basically kind of a prototype.

The rebels have several supply lines and routs from people inside the city as wel…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I have Josiah’s email.

but why are we trying to find the moderators? Is something wrong?

@whalekeeper

*Nods in deep concentration*

A serious problem indeed.

I might have the Lady of Poetry Abigail Metzger’s personal writing email somewhere in my files. I at least have access to an old WIP doc of hers. Not sure how much good she can do us, but it’s another contact for hope.

Also, where are the rebels getting fuel for their vehicles/new plane? Or, if they are battery powered, the generators that make the electricity?

@ellette-giselle

Quick observation (And this may have already been mentioned somewhere else. If it was, sorry.)

When the fighter plane is stolen, it was being transported by land (Which, based on the fact that it was completely intact, and it’s a plane, would indicate it was only going a short distance) and was apparently fueled up (since it w…[Read more]

Popping in again to let y’all know that I’m seeing all these prayer requests and praying for them! <33

@theshadow

This was really strong, it’s great you’re making Easton and Hallie struggle with the fact that Tyler’s dead and not making them coming to terms with it instantaneous. It’s realistic, and you’re doing a good job at it. I think you could maybe delve into the despair a bit more, but other than that everything is good.

Thank you!
And…[Read more]

@grcr

I’ll try to check one more time after lunch before we take off, but I’m not sure if I’ll be able to.

@grcr

also, my brother and I will be gone until Saturday or Sunday, so I won’t be replying to any more emails/KP posts until then.

@grcr

clothing colors would be ones that aren’t too bright and standoutish it the wild. Probably greens, browns, grays, maybe pale blue for Amber, tans, etc. feel free to be a little more experimental with those.

Jonathan will have the lightest complexion as he lived most of his life in the city. The others will have a healthy tan from work in t…[Read more]

@grcr

YAY!!!!! 😃

thank you so much!!!

well, I’m actually in a cabin in Idaho, and my face claims are all at home….. so I’ll see what I can do. I may have a couple on KP.

okay, it’ll be rebel outfits for them then.

Idk if it helps you, but I always like to know the person’s personality to kind of capture that, so I’ll add those.…[Read more]

@grcr

yay!!!!! 😁

hmm, well Jonathan of course. Jonathan and Jim together would be super cool!!

Ohhhh!! If you would willing to do his team in like a team picture that would be AWESOME!! I LOVE how you do those!! But if not, that’s totally fine.

I’ll just give you Jonathan to start.

Name: Jonathan Estes

Hight: about 6’1

Build: slend…[Read more]

How did I not get a KP notification for this??

@grcr

would you be willing to draw one or my characters?? 🙃

@elishavet-pidyon

ahhh!!!! The squirrel is so cute!!!!!

@grcr
WOW!!! Those are amazing!!!

@koshka

yay!!!!!

@hybridlore   @keilah-h

thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

That is so exciting! I can’t wait to finish it.

*Dumps confetti on your head*

Work is letting up for a bit (as in, about to be over for the Summer) so I’ll actually have the time I want to read and comment.

@koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper   @power   @hybridlore

NEW CHAPTERSS

THE END!!!

*Throws confetti for myself*

The book is OVER!!!

Now I am leaving tomorrow and will be out of town until the 23rd. That should give y’all plenty of time to read the last of it. When I come back…[Read more]