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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I just noticed that I’ve been writing Amir as pretty serious, but he’s a lot the opposite. In fact, he can be childish at times. (Not exactly immature, just playful, I guess. If that makes sense XD) But this is actually the first time I’ve ever written in his POV. 😬
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @I-think-I-got_everyone-XD
Oh and just so everyone knows, Amir is wearing a tan, robe-like outfit that looks wrapped around his body. But instead of being a robe all the way through, the lower section splits off into wide-legged pants. He’s wearing soft s…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Woah. I lot has happened. XD I’ll get to writing my RP later this afternoon. 🙂
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I totally understand your concern.
I’d say that in the first chapter that’s in his POV, showcase his positive character traits, but also give us a glimpse into his internal conflict so we see that he isn’t as perfect as he seems on the outside. Slowly revealing his backstory like you said you’d do will also help readers start t…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @acancello @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @grcr
Ok! I finally got it! Here ya are!
(And fyi, so far I’ve decided that the language they speak in Amir’s country is Farsi, or something very close to it, so if he talks in a different language, that’s what it is.)
(Oh, and I’m assuming we decided on the bal…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
(You just made me think, and now I feel old. I’ve been around a lot longer than most of the people regularly on here nowadays. XD)
Are you talking about before Riker turns himself in, or the end of the series?
In the former case, I’d like to ask if Riker would even go to Leon? He’s already asked for forgiveness time and again.…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Awww, I love thisss!! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh yesss, I really need to get back into this!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76 @grcr @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009
😱 I wrote almost the whole RP and then accidentally tapped on one of the links at the bottom of the page and lost it! 😭 I don’t think I have time to rewrite the whole thing now, but I promise I’ll have it posted later today or tomorrow. 😅
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
You’re sooo welcome girl!!! 💗💗
And LIGHT, OH MY GOSHHHHH, THAT MADE ME SMILE SO MUCH THIS MORNING!!!! TELL YOUR LITTLE BROTHER THANK YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
AWWWW I’M SO GLAD!!!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I did and showed him your post and he smiled and said to tell you you’re welcome 🥰🥰
And girlll…ugh that mood board…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
That was so good girl!!! So sad and sweet at the same time ❤❤❤
Poor little Sebastian…😭🥺✨❤
And Hugo 😭🥺✨❤
Your characters are now officially in my mental ‘favorite character list’ ❤
And girl I absolutely love your writing style, it is amazing…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
ARGHHHHHH! That is like one of my favorite and least favorite movies of all time!!! 😭😭😭😍😍😍 It’s SO sad but good and my poor heart can’t take it!
I KNOWWW!!!! It’s so conflictingly bittersweettttt 😭😭😍😍 After we finished it I just laid on my bed in shock, and my 11 year old brother comforted me ❤❤
I’m trying to get my family to watch…
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Light replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@FREEDOMWRITER76
OH MY GOODNESS FREEDOM!!!!!!! I AM SOOOOOOOO EXCITED FOR YOUUUUUU!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
🎉🎉🎉🎉🥳🥳🥳🥳❤❤❤❤❤🥰🥰🥰🥰
Also…I just told my little brother that you’ve finished your book (he’s been a fan ever since I let him read some of your scenes that you post)…he said to tell you that he wants to read it 🥰🥰
Also @mineral…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
*Enters the celebration hall bearing raspberry cheesecake*
HUZZZAHH!!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! May all your characters applaud you!!!
*Rounds of thunderous applause*
*Vulkasin joins in, grinning*
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @trailblazer @freedomwriter76
If nobody does it before me, I’ll write the first RP either tomorrow or Friday. 🙂 (tomorrow’s gonna be busy, so I may not get to it. 😉 )
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Woo-hoo!!!! Congratulations!!!!! 💖🥳
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Even though she’s beautiful she thinks that she’s ugly because that’s what she’s been told all her life.
If she ever says something self-derogatory in front of Amir, he’s going to be so shocked. 😂 And seeing her sort of red hair is going to surprise him (and @mineralizedwritings Kaine’s hair) since in his country red hair is…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Ok, maybe it didn’t…
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings
Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.
Ruhan Amir al Roshan
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Yay, it did it!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 12 months ago
Ughhhh it’s deleted my post like three times. It better work this time 🤞
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @acancello @mineralizedwritings
Alrighty! I’m going to put in a character that I haven’t mentioned a peep about on KP or have written one word in his POV. XD He’s from a WIP that I’m planning to spend a lot of time and effort on.
Ruhan Amir al R…[Read more]
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