Jaybird

Me: *worries that her book is going to be too short, things are happening to quickly, characters are overcoming their problems too easily, etc.*

Important character: *gets stabbed*

Me: *shrugs* That’ll do.

@rae

Congrats! your charrie is the first person Chase has ever opened up to willingly and showed his secret!

Aww 🥰 Lol. Because Callie is so awesome, I sometimes wish that she was a major character in my WIP, but she isn’t one until a few books later. XD

Callista

“You’re not alone,” Chase said, resting his hand on her shoulder. Callist…[Read more]

Woah, that last paragraph looks huge. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I don’t want him to think that I…um…like him or anything like that, and what if he doesn’t want to go to the dance with me? Then him telling me that would be even worse for him, and making him go to the dance with me if he doesn’t want to would be miserable.”

Fynn nodded his head to the side. “True.” But he still held…[Read more]

It KP acting really weird for anyone else? I can only access the forum via my notifications, and then only specific pages.

@keilah-h

Ok cool.

Ev

Ev gave Falon a small wave before making his way farther into the mall. “Ok,” he murmured to himself. “A store that sells suits…”

After a little bit of searching, he finally found a place where he could rent a tux without wrecking his budget. He casually walked through the store, searching for the perfect suit. But somet…[Read more]

Help. I’m confuzzled.

I just show up and go back a few pages and I see y’all’s insanity. It was fantastic 🤣

Anyway, @jonas, when you give Beth a summary, can you tag me too? I haven’t RPed in a little while and I’m kinda lost. XD

@keilah-h

I’m not the best at it either, lol. XD

Before I write it, is the character fully human or half-dragon?

@rae

Callista

“I…personally like green.” Chase suddenly said after a slight lull in the conversation. He paused for a moment, then said, “I-I’m sorry, I-I haven’t had a good conversation with someone for probably tw-two years. What am I supposed to say?”

Callie smiled and shrugged. “Well, I guess whatever you want to say. I’ve never really thou…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ok, awesome! We could just have them run into each other at one of the stores or something. Whatever you wanna do.

Ack! I didn’t get notified for any of these posts. 😭 I’mma try to catch up on it all now.

@smiley @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge (all the same group, right?)

Ami

“We’re new here, straight from Austin,” one of the boys—Derek?—said. “Where are y’all from?”

“I’m from Aletheia. The District of Daemarrel to be exact. Well…” she tucke…[Read more]

@overcomer

Ooo, I do prefer Ending Verse #4. It continues in the same voice as the preceding poem, while resolving the whole thing in a smooth switch of tone. (If that made any sense)

I think it would benefit from a little more structure, it need not be much more than you already have.

But that’s all according to the artist’s interpretation. It…[Read more]

@rae

Catching story. You have peaked my interest. 🙂

A critique,

“Suddenly, the form moved, throwing a knife that hit the boy straight through the heart. A cry barely escaped the boy’s lips as he fell, dead, directly at the slave girl’s feet. She stared into his dead eyes and cowered. ”

How do they/you know the knife when straight through his…[Read more]

@smiley

Ok. I’ll think I’ll have Ev meet up with some other guys… if there are any for him to meet. XD

Ev

“It would be, wouldn’t it?” Falon said with a small laugh. “But I wouldn’t get my hopes up, after all, how much can you trust rumors?”

Ev nodded to the side and smirked. “True.”

In a few steps, they had entered the bustling mall, surrou…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ohhh, lol. I think we’ve actually seen one of those before! I think it was called My Stick and it was about Yoda and his stick. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I’m not sure, exactly,” Liv shrugged. “It might just be on a different planet, though it could be different galaxies.”

“Hm, interesting,” Fynn said. He hadn’t really t…[Read more]

We could totally just send our charries to go fight dragons while knowing nothing about them…. Like, they could have a time limit that they have to kill all these dragons in or something like that to where they don’t have enough time to properly prepare…

@smiley (Sure, go right ahead!) @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

Who’s going to write the next RP? (I think I went last)

@smiley

Awesome, thanks!

Ev

“But as long as I can see the perfect red dress and suit, we should be good,” Falon said.

“Sounds good to me,” Ev said with a nod. “Even though an invisible mall would be pretty cool,” he a…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, “That log had a child

WhAt?!?! That made me laugh so much. 🤣 This is like my siblings and my type of humor. 😂

@rae

I really like it so far!! Be sure to tag me when you post new parts.

I don’t think I have anything different to add to what the others have said.

I’m really looking forward to seeing more of the world though, because my NaNo WIP takes place in an Arabian/Persian-ish country, with the whole desert vibe, and that’s what I’m getting from th…[Read more]

@overcomer

Ooo, I like this poem.

I’m not the most amazing of a poet, but I’ll post any polishing I can think of in a bit.

Thanks for sharing!