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Koshka replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
I’ve written some myself. What kind of poetry do you like to write?
Ah! Another poet, I see. I tend to write stuff with a strong pattern, even if that pattern isn’t always as clear as a rhyme scheme (although I do tend to use rhyme, meter, alliteration, all those good things). It mainly just depends on the texture of the poem I…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
Thank you! I’m homeschooled too! I’ve been homeschooled my whole life lol.
-Hmmmm. Gael, Tavion and Raven.
-Writing traveling. Getting my charries from A to B. ALSO editing it just AWFUL XD I love draft one…. I just love the whole thing ig. Even tho editing is a bit of a pain.
– Ooooohhh boyyyy. Thats hard to answer. Farenheight…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
Welcome to KP, Wren!!
I’m Esther, a homeschooled senior, lover of stories, and writer of contemporary YA. I’ve been a member for about 4 years now, but it’s been a hot second since I’ve really been active. I’m excited to see so many new people joining though!
Now some welcome questions!!
~ if you could spend a day with any three…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
[Will be posting the other chapters later]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Chapter 5
The room was bright.It smelled sweet and had a strong sense of peace. Men of white stood about.
The room had rows of chairs and a small stage-like structure at the front of the room. On the stage-like structure was a Man of White. His almost gold blond hair gleamed in the light that radiated from every Man In White and his own.
He…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Chapter 4
Reverie bit back tears as she unsteadily lifted the vessel. The water inside jostled against the side as she lifted it from the well. She staggered back to her house. She wasn’t sure what was colder. The morning chill or the dipping temperatures at night.Deception and Fear trailed behind her, Deception placed a rock in her path. She s…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Chapter 3
Fear and Deception followed Reveire ,true to their name, like a shadow. She crossed the muddy road and forced her way through the thorny plants that lined the road. They clung to her skin and pricked her, her hair got caught many times but she yanked it free while jerking her skirt as she walked. At last she broke through and found…[Read more] -
WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Chapter 2
Prince Darkness was a beautiful creature. He was adorned with precious jewels that glittered in the blue light that emitted from him. He sat atop his throne. It was carved wood with gold and silver embedded into it. The wood had been burned to stain it black. It sat on top a raised portion of the room. A rug was rolled from the throne to…[Read more] -
WritingWren replied to the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Chapter 1
First Darkness came. Then came creatures.Nestled into the valley sat a village. Old and dreary.
There was no blue sky.
No birds chirping.
And all green was gone as if something had removed it all.
The village of Nis was covered in a dark mist. The darkness that had come long ago. Creatures ran free. Deceiving and harming the faint…[Read more]
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WritingWren started the topic Made In His Image — Draft II | A Biblical Dark Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
(I’d like to put a disclaimer, that I wrote this awhile ago. My style has changed, my writer voice has improved as well as lots of other things. This project is still in the works, but has been shelfed for the time being while I work on a thriller. So, if you want to critque that’s fine, but I’m not focussing on it rn :D)
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
lol. My first book was only like 25k
Idk if I’ll delete mine. It’ll just haunt me from the google docs of unfinished and half finished projects XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum Roleplays 1 week ago
Wolfgang cries alone in the corner.
lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
Yes! You can find everything online! Here is the publishing company : h ttps://wildhorsepublishing.net/
(Delete the space between the “h” and “t”. One thing you will learn fast is KP hates links, lol)
Here is my art and graphic designing: h ttps://wildhorsepublishing.net/ellette-g-ulmer-illustrations [and]   h ttp…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
Greetings and welcome! I write middle-grade fantasy, youth fiction, and a smattering of poetry. I’m also a historical clothing/culture nerd, hand-crafting enthusiast, and full-time university student (which makes it a little difficult to keep up with the other stuff, but alas. Tis my life.).
My current WIP is about a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic HELLO ALL in the forum Start HERE 1 week ago
GASP. QUESTIONS.
Well yes!
In writing, I think I struggle most with focusing on the small details on the story, and keepings things consistent throughout. I picture the story and the characters in my head, but then I write it down and always seem to miss the small details (though, I do think I add too much noodle fluff). I am also…
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 1 day ago
Thanks! Lol, I guess I have a little. Hmm, my favorite part of writing is probably… drafting. NOT DRAFT 2 OR 3!!! They are painfullllll.
My least favorite is editing, and draft 2-3.
I work with succulents, and vegtables. So many.. I can’t name them all XD
Hmmm, my favorite name? Jared maybe?
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 1 day ago
HELLO STELLA 😀 TYSM
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 1 day ago
Yeah!
Okay, so the first one I wrote was a spy mystery/triller it was my first novel, and therfore my trash novel XD Idk what it was about tbh… it was crazy.. I pansted it fully lol My second is a Biblical Allagory, like Pilgrims Progress meets Hinds Feet in High Places. Its about the village outcast who learns of a kingdom…[Read more]
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WritingWren replied to the topic Hello! I'm Wren 😀 in the forum Start HERE 1 week, 1 day ago
Thanks so much!!
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