Jaybird

@linus-smallprint

glad I could be of some help!

oh, that makes sense. 😄

@ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h @koshka @freed_and_redeemed @trailblazer @whalekeeper @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @power

Announcing the winners!!!!

First, like the previous judges, I will go over each story.

Shadow:

What a short, sweet story! You are sucked right into a conflict,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

good work!!

wait… your hand cramps from writing? Mine never did that. I thought it was a myth.

but I also thought unions burning peoples eyes was a myth until my friend and I were cooking stir fry and she started tearing up really bad while cutting them. 🤣

@linus-smallprint

oh my goodness. She’s a horrible mother. 😂

(and I feel bad for laughing)

I was actually thinking about the magic. It seems to be thought based. Like yours. At first it seems emotion based, but then when I rewatched “let it go” to see if I was right, it seems more thought based. Whatever it is, we aren’t told how she’s c…[Read more]

Oh goodness.
🙄😂

@keilah-h

Thank you!! 😊

@theducktator

Thanks!

Ummm… sort of??? I mean, I based it loosely off of my relationship with my older brother—we tend to get along for the most part and rarely, if ever, actually fight. Of course we do goof off, but half of what we goof off about would look so weird in a book. XDD

I know what you mean though, and I d…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

oh goodness.
there is so much wrong with that song.
😂

@linus-smallprint

hey, weird question. I was thinking about your magic system……

have you ever seen Frozen?
(I wouldn’t recommend the movie, but I have seen it before and I was thinking about something in reference to it.)

@hybridlore

yeah I missed that with them having won. But maybe that was just me.

oh okay! No problem. Sorry for the confusion.

@the_lost-journal

I don’t see why the priest has to be involved. I could go into this and why I believe it’s unbiblical, but this is a time when I’m not going to. Honestly, are you going to convert me to catholicism? No. Am I going to convert you to Reformed Baptist? No.
I find this topic really interesting, enjoyable, and even helpful, don’t…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I liked that chapter about Cole. Sometimes fillers are okay if they further develop the character. Plus, it was one of your best.
you can even end it with his game death and then have him say something to a friend who’s on the game team about pulling through and winning that last one.
just an idea. But I honestly wouldn’t remove or…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation? (For those who don’t know, reconciliation is where catholics go (supposed to be at least every month) to confess their sins. And then they are forgiven for them.) And what questions do you have. (That definition is the most simple version, there is more to it.)

I can copy and p…[Read more]

@raxforge   @freed_and_redeemed

Kefa missed your tags.
⬆️

@whalekeeper

I think he’s more concerned that he can’t flex his abs. *Rolls eyes*

Legit concern 😂

Naw, jk jk. 😉 I’ll be praying! <3

@savannah_grace2009 @koshka @theshadow

Sorry you three! I got busy on Monday…then the KP web wasn’t working on Tuesday…but I’ll read them today. So, stay tuned!

@whalekeeper

haha! 🤣

I would love to see a Rory jumping from the bus, arms, hair, legs, and shirt flying! 🤣

if you post anymore drawings let me know!!

@hybridlore

I found a round about way to get access!! (Don’t ask)

anyways!! I am really liking this!!

a few notes:

Everette (I think) asks if Sara knows who Jesus was. Now, unless you have a very different theology than I do, I believe it’s who Jesus “is” not “was”.

Also, unless I missed something, the last we had with Cole was his screen…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*screams and dances around the room*

*looks back at it and dies laughing*

oh my word!!  It’s so accurate tho!! That is a total Leo expression! And Rory is… yeah, being Rory. 😂

draw another one!!!

please!!! Pretty please!! 🥹🥹

(you don’t have too if you don’t want)

you could do Rory running away from Barns…. Or Rory ye…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

IS THAT ALAN ABD MARTHA!!?!? *excited dance*

umm…. I don’t do that. Like, at all. I just go for it after hitting beginning, climax, and end. And fully graphing characters. I sketch out the characters. 🤷🏼‍♀️

I mean, I treat writing as me telling you what happened to my friends. I saw the events, here they are. If I do too muc…[Read more]