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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Hmmm. No promises.
Really out of character for him too! lololol.
I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄
Oh 100%.
Especially since I know something you don’t………….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Leon!!!! Yes!!!
I’m guessing this means you’re happy with what he did?
lolol
Great section. He must have been really famous…
Oh he was. You see, he was the White Knight, and the White Knight –––––––––––––––––––––––
So yeah, that would explain it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
haha!
Well thanks for understanding. I’ll try to read it as soon as possible, but I’m not sure when that will be.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
and Leon takes the plunge.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.
“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.
“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!
YES!
Any thoughts on that?
No, they moved into the University for the winter. I mentioned it at one point, but you may have missed it. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
absulutly.
It just really matters how you go about saying that. If we are to speak truth and proclaim Jesus, that means we need to discredit false gods. God is not One among many. There is only ONE.
But yeah, it depends on how you go about doing so and if you’re antagonistic about it or do it in a loving and kind way. And again,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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Power replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
If so, then I believe there is a pretty good precedence to do so.
If not, then we likely shouldn’t do it either.
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Power replied to the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 6 months ago
I’ll answer your question with a question.
Did Peter, Philip, Stephen, Paul, Priscilla and Aquila, or ultimately Jesus tell anyone that their religion was false or that their god doesn’t exist?
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Esther replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ohhhh my wordddd
Ok that actually makes so much sense. I felt like the story was moving too fast and wasn’t exactly sure how to slow it down.
Thanks for pointing that out!! <33
Mmm. If that’s how other books do it, I guess it could work. I looked it up and some people say to extend the vowels and smooth con…
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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Mmmm…that does make sense, I’m just not sure how to do that.
Instead of “hope”, my characters are trying to fix their problems themselves. Which might be a “false hope”, but I don’t really see it as hope. I understand what you mean, I’m just not exactly sure how to do that.
Ok! Yeah, again, do what you wanna do. But if you…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
🥰
Thanks! It’s my first…and I’m pretty pleased with how it turned out. After thinking about it, though, I think I will add some pictures and edit some of the words. Guy has two sides of himself. and the board doesn’t really show the second side of him…so I’m thinking of updating it.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Sorry…I looked for the Susan story but couldn’t find it. I found some others, but none of them compared to the one I read. It was short, but very beautiful, sweet, and Christian.
If you like, I can retell what I remember of the story.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!
So wait, are the only people at that place students? I don’t see much mention of villagers during that winter season. If there were villagers, did they move into the University as well?
Is their inn connected to the University? Because in that deep of snow… amid a b…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
Me too!
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle (In case you were wondering about Guy as well)
Here’s somewhat of a summary:
A man searching for redemption from his past…
A band of outlaws trying to make a difference…
A land twisted and poisoned by its cold-hearted rulers…
Guy is a young man living with a deep inner…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
WOW!! Those are awesome!
I don’t use references really. Unless it’s for outfits……….
Nice!! I like it!
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