Elishavet Elroi

@ellette-giselle

True, but you couldn’t really make him 60, and you do have a lot of teens.

@theducktator

I know, right? XD

@keilah-h

My sister sent it to me. I’m not sure where she found it.

@liberty

Liberty…..

you are insufferable.

😂

NOTHING about Marius and the prince?

 

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

CALLED IT!!

As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!

@koshka

Uh, 21 is still between 16-30

@ellette-giselle

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

*nod*

Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.

@ellette-giselle

Why not bump Hans to twenty-one? So small a change shouldn’t mess up your plotting ect. but it looks like a new number. You do have a lot of ‘teens.

@linus-smallprint

Also, as for them majority being males, I grew up in a household of boys, and my sister came along when I was already in my teens. Sooo…. boys have always been easy for me to write because I can watch them. I find girls harder because I don’t really live with older girls.

@linus-smallprint

Nice.

ugh!!! Why did I know it would be you who would say that?! 😭

This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂

I have had some older characters…… somewhere……….. I know there were some.

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@koshka

lololol. This book has already been written, and I’m not changing anything, so don’t worry about that. You can email the ideas to me so as to keep the others in the dark though. 😉

@ellette-giselle

Yessss…but they’re kinda vague and uncertain. And I don’t want to give you ideas if I’m wrong.

@koshka

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

🤣

Julian and Leon both it seems, though Leon’s was more of an encouragement and Julian’s a bit of correction.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

Have you got any guesses?

@ellette-giselle

That emoji really shouldn’t fit you in mad author mode as well as it does. XD

I see Jillian is having to play a Paul and straighten out churches through letters.

Still sorting out who’s going to die before the end of this book, so you’ve done well there.

@hybridlore

Unless he came back at the head of an army….. 😈

@hybridlore

Yes, but that was a direct scripture quotation, and I’m not going to add my country names into that. 😉

Are ya now? What if he betrays them?

@freed_and_redeemed

Ohhh, they look so good!!!

@koshka

Gotcha.

If it’s PTSD in particular I don’t have much. I have research on gas trauma from WW1, but otherwise I haven’t got a ton. I do have heaps of info on things happening during the war. Here’s two I have bookmarked.

h ttps://www.history.com/articles/history-of-ptsd-and-shell-shock

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s651JQxSPlU

@liberty

Black horse for a black rider.

What can I say?

@liberty

that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!

😂

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The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
November 25th
The Empire

To Wolf, Peter, and the Church in Landstraten,
Greetings in Christ.

Our time in the Capital has been one filled with blessings and the grace of God. We have a sm…

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