Jaybird

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @theducktator     @grcr   @whalekeeper

( @kyronthearcanin       @jonas      @power )

CHAPTER 4 and 5!!!!

@hybridlore

Yay! Wonder what glitched before…. 🤔

Oh really? Whoops! Did you mark the spot, or do I need to go find it?

Glad the tension is building!! Have a favorite character yet?

@hybridlore

That is very odd. Did you let it load and scroll down? I just tried clicking on the link as a guest and it worked fine for me…..

Try again. I reloaded the page on my end,

@hybridlore

Okay, great! I’m glad you felt that difference.

Yes…Jace is the youngest. Everyone else is in their twenties or thirties…Jace is the only one with the word “teen” in his age. Everyone views him like their little brother.

Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol…

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@whalekeeper

haha.

@linus-smallprint

Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]

@hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon        @theducktator     @grcr

( @kyronthearcanin      @whalekeeper        @jonas      @power )

Next Chapters!!! (2 of them!!!)

@linus-smallprint

Thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, well at least you made me laugh really hard. 😂

@linus-smallprint

 

Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!

🤣

But it did! Really!

See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”

It…[Read more]

I know this is a massive article I’m sharing, lol, but I’ve agreed with anything I’ve read from this website (and everything I’ve seen/read at the Creation Museum and Ark Encounter). This article explains why they believe the earth was created in six literal 24-hour days.

And to answer the question, I am also a young-earth creationist.

@savannah_grace2009

❤️❤️❤️

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll keep watching from the shadows and once the draft is over I’ll give you more input on that XD

Yes please do!

@theducktator

I will! I’m not actually taking it until tomorrow, because when we arrived at the BMV, there was a 49 person wait. It’s not usually that crowded, so we’ll go back tomorrow.

Oh goodness! that’s ridiculous 😂

Some of the material will depend on state and my driver’s ed program said that there were a lot of road sign questions and you c…

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@linus-smallprint

Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.

i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.

I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]

@keilah-h

@linus-smallprint

Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.

I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.

Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.

@linus-smallprint

Can you re-invite me.

Smaug attack.

Again.

Lost EVERYTHING.

Ugh.

@linus-smallprint

*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*

I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.

Maybe.