Jaybird

@koshka
Homework.
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@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @smiley @calyhuge

I’m kinda stuck on what to write. XD Someone else can go next if they want.

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Callista

Callie had a soft smile on her face as she watched Chase ride the horse. He seemed right at home on Xandro’s back. After a minute or two, Callista took a small step forward. “Not to interrupt, but I think it’s about time we head out to the mall if we want to get home before dinner. Everyone okay with that?…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Would one of y’all like to RP?

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Lol! I know someone named Lukas, and once you meet him once, you will never forget him. The only way my friends and I can explain him as, is “Lukas is Lukas.” Every time I read your characters name, I think of the quote “Rope is cheep.” (Don’t ask.) XD he’s a funny guy, especially when he wears his top hat!

Lol 😂 O…[Read more]

Me: *worries that her book is going to be too short, things are happening to quickly, characters are overcoming their problems too easily, etc.*

Important character: *gets stabbed*

Me: *shrugs* That’ll do.

@rae

Congrats! your charrie is the first person Chase has ever opened up to willingly and showed his secret!

Aww 🥰 Lol. Because Callie is so awesome, I sometimes wish that she was a major character in my WIP, but she isn’t one until a few books later. XD

Callista

“You’re not alone,” Chase said, resting his hand on her shoulder. Callist…[Read more]

Woah, that last paragraph looks huge. XD

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I don’t want him to think that I…um…like him or anything like that, and what if he doesn’t want to go to the dance with me? Then him telling me that would be even worse for him, and making him go to the dance with me if he doesn’t want to would be miserable.”

Fynn nodded his head to the side. “True.” But he still held…[Read more]

It KP acting really weird for anyone else? I can only access the forum via my notifications, and then only specific pages.

@keilah-h

Ok cool.

Ev

Ev gave Falon a small wave before making his way farther into the mall. “Ok,” he murmured to himself. “A store that sells suits…”

After a little bit of searching, he finally found a place where he could rent a tux without wrecking his budget. He casually walked through the store, searching for the perfect suit. But somet…[Read more]

Help. I’m confuzzled.

I just show up and go back a few pages and I see y’all’s insanity. It was fantastic 🤣

Anyway, @jonas, when you give Beth a summary, can you tag me too? I haven’t RPed in a little while and I’m kinda lost. XD

@keilah-h

I’m not the best at it either, lol. XD

Before I write it, is the character fully human or half-dragon?

@rae

Callista

“I…personally like green.” Chase suddenly said after a slight lull in the conversation. He paused for a moment, then said, “I-I’m sorry, I-I haven’t had a good conversation with someone for probably tw-two years. What am I supposed to say?”

Callie smiled and shrugged. “Well, I guess whatever you want to say. I’ve never really thou…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Ok, awesome! We could just have them run into each other at one of the stores or something. Whatever you wanna do.

Ack! I didn’t get notified for any of these posts. 😭 I’mma try to catch up on it all now.

@smiley @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge (all the same group, right?)

Ami

“We’re new here, straight from Austin,” one of the boys—Derek?—said. “Where are y’all from?”

“I’m from Aletheia. The District of Daemarrel to be exact. Well…” she tucke…[Read more]

@overcomer

Ooo, I do prefer Ending Verse #4. It continues in the same voice as the preceding poem, while resolving the whole thing in a smooth switch of tone. (If that made any sense)

I think it would benefit from a little more structure, it need not be much more than you already have.

But that’s all according to the artist’s interpretation. It…[Read more]

@rae

Catching story. You have peaked my interest. 🙂

A critique,

“Suddenly, the form moved, throwing a knife that hit the boy straight through the heart. A cry barely escaped the boy’s lips as he fell, dead, directly at the slave girl’s feet. She stared into his dead eyes and cowered. ”

How do they/you know the knife when straight through his…[Read more]

@smiley

Ok. I’ll think I’ll have Ev meet up with some other guys… if there are any for him to meet. XD

Ev

“It would be, wouldn’t it?” Falon said with a small laugh. “But I wouldn’t get my hopes up, after all, how much can you trust rumors?”

Ev nodded to the side and smirked. “True.”

In a few steps, they had entered the bustling mall, surrou…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ohhh, lol. I think we’ve actually seen one of those before! I think it was called My Stick and it was about Yoda and his stick. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

“I’m not sure, exactly,” Liv shrugged. “It might just be on a different planet, though it could be different galaxies.”

“Hm, interesting,” Fynn said. He hadn’t really t…[Read more]