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Esther replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
If you gave me a deadline, I’d be totally down for it! Sometimes I’m busy with school and whatnot, but if I have a deadline, I’ll be sure to get to it and give you some feedback!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I’d be willing to help for sure! I may not have a tone of time, but I’ll do what I can!
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Liberty replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Sure thing! I may not be able to get it to right away…at least all of it, but I’m willing to help you!
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freedom posted an update 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Broken Shackles is officially coming January 27th, 2025💜 thank you all for your friendship, love, and continued support…it literally means the…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Amazing scene! And I agree with Whaley. Not too repetitive, but maybe substitute a few of those “Fathers” with something like, “The man” or something. Not too much of that either, but just enough to brake up the monotony of “Father”
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (she says like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h Thanks! It’s a newish WIP that my sister and I came up with last year (like that was so long ago. XD). It doesn’t have a title yet, but it’s currently Project Crowns.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yay!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@Ellette-Giselle Okay, so it’s not the first chapter yet (that’s not moving on for some reason) but I wrote the Prologue to the WIP I was talking about.
Prologue
A secret is a terrible thing.
Aliena let the door fall closed behind her with a weary thud.
“Your wife is resting, my lord. You have a beautiful son.”
The man sat down on the edge of…
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freedom replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@smiley I love it!!! 😍😍😍 BUCKYYYYY
And I also love her dynamic with Tony 🤣🤣
@keilah-h it’s kinda interesting that you bring this up, bc it’s at least hinted at in the MCU that Steve was raided Christian
“There’s only one God, ma’am, and I’m pretty sure he doesn’t dress like that.”
And Thor and Loki, tho seen as “gods” aren’t actually…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 8 months ago
HE IS SO STINKING COOL!!!
That’s slick that is!
Haha! AI murders hands!
Pockets are a good idea. My mom hates drawing hands so she always sketches her characters with them in their pockets or behind their backs. (If you want only one hand in the pocket you can turn the character slightly so that his hip and leg hides the other…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
YOU JUST RUINED THE TONE OF THAT SCENE!!!! XDXDXD!! lolololol.
That was really good! I liked it a lot! I have written a few desert scenes myself, and they always make me hot and thirsty. (Great scenes to write in the winter 😉 )
That would be really interesting for water people to be in a place where they…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are SHOCKING!
Yup, it sure is…but you have to expect this to happen when people are not taught…like in schools. Even homeschooled families don’t always teach the right history either…American history is a big example.
I a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?
Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I know!
(btw, are you just snooping on the conversation, or did you read the story section I posted?)
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I know! We were just reading in Joshua last night in our family devotions about the crossing of the Jordan. One part really struck me. It was this one:
So Joshua called together the twelve men he had appointed from the Israelites, one from each tribe, and said to them, “Go over before the ark of the Lord your God into the middle of th…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I know! My family has been reading and studying about Bonhoeffer recently, and it’s amazing to think that this happened recently. I mean, people are still alive that lived through WW2!! And we’ve already forgotten SO much of it…talk about not taking heed to past failures…but the Bible says those things happen: forgetting the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, it did happen, but a lot of people didn’t realize it. Most times when you say “WWII Germany” everyone else replies “Nazis”. But that’s not all the way true. Yes, there were tones of Nazis and tones of Hitler Youth and Gestapo and SS. But there were also normal people trying to survive, Christians debating weather or not to take a…[Read more]
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@freed_and_redeemed
AHHHH girl I’m so proud of you!!!!
ahhh love you girl, you’re amazing <3
Congratulations!!! That’s exciting!
Ahh!! So exciting!!! CONGRATS!!! 🥳
I’m definitely not crying rn because i’m so excited that it’s finally coming out
THAT’S SO GREAT!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!
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AHHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!…[Read more]
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
AYYY That’s awesome! Congrats!!! Can’t wait to buy/read itttttt (hopefully)!!!
EEEEEE I can’t wait!!
HURRAH!…[Read more]
YAY! Congratulations! *Dumps several buckets of confetti everywhere*
@freed_and_redeemed I know I’m not on much but this came through my email and AHHHH I HAD TO COME AND SAY CONGRATS FREEDOM 😭 IM SRSLY SO HAPPY FOR YOU! And while I don’t read historical fiction I already knew I was gonna be buying ur books girl. I HAVE TO OF COURSE!!! I ALREADY HAVE KNOWN THE CHARRIES! THE BABIES!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!
@godlyfantasy12 you just made my day😭😭 THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH💜💜💜😭 And yes, they’re available on Amazon! (Freedom’s Fire is in paperback, hardback, and Ebook; Broken Shackles is only paperback and EBook) I’ll send the link in a minute 😊 and I’d love to get you a signed copy…you just gotta meet me…[Read more]
WHY DIDN’T I KNOW UR OTHER BOOK WAS PUBLISHED AHHHH WHY AM I SO FAR BEHIND IN EVERYTHING SOOOB I WOULD’VE ALREADY BOUGHT ITTTTTTTTTTT @freed_and_redeemed
Will it be available on Amazon? If not, where at? I’m a paperback girly for the most part!!!
@godlyfantasy12 there’s the link!
@freed_and_redeemed
Awesome!
@freed_and_redeemed thx! ALSO!!! U may have said this somewhere else but since idk exactly how ur running ur series…which book is the brothers in…? (MY SWEET SWEET BABIESSSSS!!! I NEEEEED MY WOLFIEEEEE AND RUEBEEEEN AND ALL MY OTHER DARLINGS)
@godlyfantasy12 haha, I get it! XD Sooo my main focus atm is Leon/Riker’s trilogy, which means all 3 novels are only Leon and Riker as POV characters.
HOWEVER, the Bois first appear in Freedom’s Fire and will also appear in Book 3 (they’re not in book 2, tho, sadly).
And I have plans for them to have their own novel eventually, it’s just more on…[Read more]
ALSO UMMM ONE DAY I WILL BE NEEDING A SIGNED COPY MAAAAAM
yoooo you’re here! how’s your writing going?
@keilah-h It’s…not really at the moment lol
lol that happens.
@savannah_grace2009 @liberty @smiley @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @theducktator @grcr Thank y’all so much😭😭💜
I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE COVER!!!
GIRL!!!!
yessss the cover is awesome.
You’re so welcome!!!!!
I’m so sorry I’m so late on this but
OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATS!!!! I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR YOU AHHHHH 🥳🥳🥳😭😭😭 SO HAPPY RNNN!!! I cannot WAIT to get Broken Shackles!!! Love you so much girl!!! <333
And someday I'll definitely have to come to one of your book signings and get a signed copy🤭
@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!
YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶