Jaybird

@ellette-giselle

~ Was the plot solid and engaging?

Pretty much!

~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?

It seemed that a lot of incidents were happening during the time that Leon and Rolf had their entire slavery journey compared to the rest of the story. There may have been a few lagging…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

@raxforge

This guy is insane.

@grcr

GIRL! Your pfp!!!

So good!

@rae

I learned to draw people by tracing black and white photographs for an entire year. I really learned the way people work. That was just me though. idk if that would help everyone.

We’ve got some severe weather/tornado warnings. Prayers please! 💕

@grcr

I’ll be praying for her. 🙏🏻🩷

@theducktator

THIS is why I’m not dating until college. 😂 I think I’d be allowed before then…but the sibling awkwardness is too much.

For real thoughhh 😂 I know in some family’s it’s not awkward, but I decided to go for it with Hallie’s family. XD

*squealing* I can forgive him for not taking her. He has a good reason.

🤭

*tries that* Can you rea…

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@linus-smallprint

Lololol.

We have two.

Below freezing

Burning hot.

Five days ago we had a blizzard. (I went and walked in it so that I could write it accurately in a book I was working on)

The next day it was in the 80s F.

Today it’s in the 90s. F.

@the_lost-journal

Oooo! Fun!!! I love that story so much!

@whalekeeper

Knew what?!

@linus-smallprint    @hybridlore

Oh my word! I just saw that tiny bit of the test you created, Linus. I actually stared at it for a full minute because I was too scared to mess with it. That book is 100% way too real for me. 😂 And then I did a Cole move, threw caution to the wind, and have spent the last five minutes trying to hack it.

That th…[Read more]

@grcr

WOW!!!!

That is insanely good! You gotta tag me every time you post. I LOVE your art!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, great!

@ellette-giselle

My gosh, you have a lot of questions! 😂 Now I don’t feel bad for having a lot of questions for my stories!

@hybridlore

For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long.

Yes! That’s exactly what I think as well!

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

For me, I would say I related the most to Conrad. That’s probably because I’ve had doubts before, like him, and faced fears and uncertainties.

I would also relate to Julian in certain areas since I am kind of like him.

I thought that Dian was a…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay that makes sense.

That is totally how I plan to have this structured, but at that time, many of the men were hearing about God for the first time, and the Bible talks about leaders and teachers being strong in their faith and well rooted in belief before they teach.

@ellette-giselle

Not sure why…. but for some reason I’m not understanding this. Is there a typo…. or am I really crazy?

26 How is it then, brethren? Whenever you come together, each of you has a psalm, has a teaching, has a tongue, has a revelation, has an interpretation. Let all things be done for [a]edification.

When the church came together…[Read more]

@hybridlore

@keilah-h

Thank you for the feedback!

@liberty

Sorry!!!

You should have chosen an MC as your favorite. They actually all survived this time. 😂

I was like, oh no, she’s gonna love him and he’s gonna die. (he’s my favorite too, so we can cry together)

@ellette-giselle

Okay…

I was not expecting that. Especially at the end of the book!!!! You just crushed my heart again by killing another favorite character…

Despite the heart-wrenching deaths of *sob* the prince and his friend…it was a great ending and I’m intrigued by this mysterious character who wrote the letter.