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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 15 minutes ago
Good question! It’s been a while. Here’s a revamp of his old intro.
Viktor
Life is a confusing thing. When it gets turned upside down, it’s even more so. One moment you’re a young refugee in a foster system, and then the next you’ve been given a dream, a hope, and a nightmare all in one.
Basically what happens when you find your…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 hours, 52 minutes ago
Here we go!
Viktor (Library)
The book was thick. Too thick. Viktor rubbed his forehead where a sharp pain had started. He had not realized how much he had fallen behind in the shuffle between houses. Maybe if this was his mother tongue it would make sense.
He slapped the book shut. If he had to wait until Reúven could…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 hours, 18 minutes ago
… Anyone want to meet a charrie in the school library?
I think Viktor could be doing some homework there.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t know what he’ll think. XD In this RP, Reúven is serving in the “National Guard Civil Reserves”(civil service, so natural disaster response and some military training. He only wears his uniform while on/just off duty.). He’s pursuing his masters in divinity+ ministerial licence so he can join the chaplaincy when he’s 21.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 1 hour ago
@whalekeeper Indeed. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 9 hours ago
Thank you! 🙂 I didn’t explore their friendship much in this RP before, but now y’all get the full benefit. XD
By the way, I’m always a little surprised at people’s reaction to Reúven. His arc was inspired by a character from a historical fiction series who is called a terrorist. And people call Reúven adorable. It’s hilarious, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
@koshka @whalekeeper @ellette-giselle
I’ll have to check, but I think Reúven is 16… Don’t be fooled by his cadet uniform. XD
Liora (+intro)
The bus slid to a stop with a loud exhalation from the brakes. The doors swooshed open. For a moment, no one entered, then a heeled shoe was heard on the step. A young woman in a red wool coat slid into…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
This is random, but I loved the AU backstory my characters had in this RP. And I’m having so much fun reading this Leo+Rory+Barnes drama. They don’t have to interact with my characters, but I would like to “join” if that’s ok.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
YES MA’AM. *squeak of terror*
Actually, I’m making Christmas cookies today, just like I have the past two-to-three days this week. Getting ready for a cookie exchange. So it’ll be a bit. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 days, 10 hours ago
Aw… it’s Leon. ❤️ I’m so happy find he’s stealing your heart again. I am concerned about this “broken it” comment, lol.
I really like the picture of him cooking with his daughter. It says a lot about him as a person and their situation. And the quotes are perfection.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
Very nice! Although I have not watched the movies (I saw part of the first one?) I can definitely apply all you said to the books. Including writing stories more like Narnia instead.
*chokes on snow*
Yay! Onnendel is becoming my favorite of the cast. XD
Oh. Ick.
I should have seen that coming. That’s ugly. Wow. *…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 10 hours ago
I would like to inform those who may be concerned for my sanity.
I have a brother.
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose. 😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 11 hours ago
Beahahaha!?!!?! Squigaldy Squagaldy spiggals!!!!!!!¡¡¡
TBM
PWR
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 13 hours ago
Stupendous points! Those are things I’ve thought about with a shudder. Some of our soldiers captured in Afghanistan were women. In one situation, she was the only one to survive because the medical staff of the place didn’t want to see her die.
Our Marine grandfather told my mother that she’d enlist “over his dead body.” Meanwhile, a…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 11 hours ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 12 hours ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 7 hours ago
I’m glad it’s a good one. I’ve imagined telling it to little kids at reenactments (Which is to say, I’ve imagined being in reenactments).
Crater Base sounds interesting! Sibling built stories are the best.
You know, we played some elaborate games with our dolls, Littlest Petshops, and LEGOs, but I think our stuffed animals were the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 7 hours ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper
I wrote a happy scene and a rather sad scene. However, the happy scene would makes very little sense to anyone reading the story, so I’m sharing the sad one. XD
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There was too much silence in his room. Onnendel pushed himself up on his elbow to see over the mound of pillows. The sunlight that splashed across…[Read more]
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