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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Good idea!
Now is it why I’m killing him, or why the other characters kill him?
Why I’m killing him is that, well, it’s a little complicated.
When I first had the inspiration for him, it was as a serf that was killed for treason. This I always planned to kill him. However, after the story changed a bit and he became an MC, I…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Awwwwwwwwww.
That’s so sweet, but not in a sugary way, if you know what I mean.
And I love that there’s hope in it. Like I’ve said before, a hopeless death is worse than tragic.
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Does anyone want to know how Alwin does?
Heh, heh.
I’m not sure why I’m asking, except that like everything else in those books, his death is based off of a real testimony. (Several different missionaries, actually.)
And I love it!
Even though I HATE it.
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Yeah, I’m probably suffering from some trauma because now I’m numb to Leon’s death. 😉
I don’t know, it just struck me as really good, fitting. To be completely honest and transparent, I’ve been to waayy more funerals in my life than births or weddings. Maybe the way he dies just strikes me as somewhat peaceful. There’s joy in…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Who do you think it is? 🙂
And yes, @koshka you nearly made me cry. Which is funny since I’ve known about Oswald for a while, but still… *Sniffle*
I can be completely fair and tell you who does, but…
Anyway, FreedomWriter may know who it is. Sooo.
Yes, one of them is Alwin.
BUT IT’S NOT TILL THE FOURTH BOOK!!
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
See how I feel?! XD
But no, I haven’t exactly introduced them yet. Or not with a character sketch/excerpt or anything like that. Viktor should live. 😉
Honestly, I would tell, but since I haven’t REALLY introduced them, you might try that coping mechanism where you don’t get close to the character you know will die, and I want…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic MAJOR WIP SPOILER FORUM!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
You did? It does? Yay! Do you like it? 🙂
I’m contemplating telling y’all Fritz’s real name, but I’d also want to go back and tell you the whole story behind it, and that would take long.
And YES! Character deaths. I love them about as much as I hate them, which is a lot.
(And I want to ask who dies, but also don’t know if I…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
“Well then chaps, youngest to oldest.” The man…eighteen year-old… Mikkel bowed to him. “Viktor.”
Viktor nodded and looked up at the window. Why did he suddenly feel nervous? He’d done this – loved doing this.
He closed his eyes with a sigh and leaned his head against the stone, lis…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Yayyy!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I can!!!
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Jaybird replied to the topic Y'all…I'm gonna need Advice. in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ah! Fantasy.
First off, those characters and story sound fascinating.
(Is Josephine’s hair really like it is in the picture? Because if so… It’s beautiful!! So thick and wavy and warm copper-brown. And although it could be longer, it’s a good length.) [I’ve totally never made a character starting from her hair. Never. ;)…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
So… I’m working on the important ages in Eirtan. This is a mix between medieval and ancient societies, so it gets interesting.
For boys:
14 is of course, the age of accountability/adulthood. (Like a Bar Mitzvah, only different) 21 is the age when one is considered grown up – a man. (It’s also kinda traditional age to get…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Oh and yes, Alyona makes noise. XD I honestly didn’t realize how quiet she can be until I started writing this.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Yeah….
He’s not big on public displays of affection. XD but he’ll have to get over it before he turns thirty.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Viktor
That was… Interesting. He’d been too distracted watching Lyn escape certain injury by her fingernails, and recovering from the nervous shock the sight had sent through the group to notice what Crosshair was up to.
Next thing Viktor knew, the man was through the window and calling down…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Good. Poor, dear November. 😂🤣😂
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Jaybird replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I beg the pardon that I was too shy to beg before.
*Falls to knees*
There were no stairs in my RP. It was a figure of speech in which the pile of garbage made the height of the window less.
But of course, if stairs would make things easier, they can be there. Clearing the rubble might prove rather difficult, but it’s not like…[Read more]
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