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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
*My face is obscured by the deep folds of my cloak’s cowl, but a slow smile can just be made out.*
*Takes a long sip of peppermint tea*
That’s a neat name.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Sure!
Also… I want to bump my beloved characters, Winifrith, Alwin, and William, into the next book so they can all interact. And maybe add Percy…
(Percy is that kind of Bible College student that is super anointed but also a complete goofball. He looooves to tease his friends as be teased back. On second thought, he and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
This is a glorious idea!
Those are gorgeous. My favorite is also the last one of November. It’s such a beautiful picture. (I adore photography… And his smile, the way it gleams in his eyes is perfect.)
Also the first one of Grimm is an old favorite of mine. (He looks a. Lot. Like Alwin, they just have…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Ah, Charrie names! I love character name meanings!
Heir of Ashes
Viktor –Â Champion or conquerer (latin root, Russian derivative)
Alyona –Â bright light or torch bearer (Greek root, Russian derivative)
NadÃan – uh… I kinda made this one up, although it apparently is a Hebrew name meaning “pond”. However, in the language of my bo…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
MAYBE BECAUSE I SAID THE THIRD MIGHT END TRAGICALLY? O.O
However, I’ve been thinking about it, and their chances of getting married have grown exponentially.
It just depends on a certain spoiler….
But don’t worry, there’s hope, and considering that Reúven is one of my favorite characters, a pretty strong hope at that.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Wellllllllll…..
She wouldn’t marry anyone else.
Awww, November is adorable.
Actually, they met when they were 4-5 too, but Reúven didn’t like her! They were “enemies”. XD
She was the granddaughter of an old shepherd in the mountains that opened his house to Micha, and she was jealous of her Grandfather’s attention.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Novella is the bestest. (I mean, others have done virtuously, but thou excelest them all)
And that was out of context. XD Anyway….
Yeah, stuff has changed, and I think it’s for the better.
Fun fact: Reúven’s been planning to marry her since he was twelve. Of course, he hasn’t actually told anyone this, but… His author…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writing Romantic Subplots! in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @ally’all
Oh! I do actually have three romantic subplots. One, you know about, one is a spoiler, and one may or may not end tragically. (But I think you know about that last one)
Anyway, I love making sweet, natural romances. My first was, of course, Alwin and Winifrith.
They sorta meet in the second book, but neither really…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hey y’all… in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 years, 4 months ago
Absolutely going to be praying. (Sorry I saw this so late)
Your book’s cover is beautiful, by the way!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Oh! I love the moodboard! All the faith and light references are exquisite. They really ring true.
Ah, gotta love the knettels. XD
I never thought of Nyx with jumping abilities, but it definitely makes sense!
And he is cute, no matter what he says. the poor fellow. XD
Perhaps I should share something….…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Sensitive Topics: Abuse in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Content warning: references to sin and different kinds of abuse. Also, I’m kinda more frank about some situations in my books than normal. Lol!
Ahh…. Trauma. I honestly hadn’t really thought of what Alwin goes through as trauma. *Facepalm* Of course, it is. I think I like the term “toxic parent”, because his mother isn’t…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
Welcome!
Not sure exactly what you mean… perhaps I am unlearned in my writing terms lol. I mean, I had to look up what wip meant at some point…
Sorry, I was referring to a flower I remembered to play a role. I didn’t want to be too specific just in case 1. It was a spoiler, and 2. Something had changed
I didn’t look up…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Thank you!! ❤️ I really like how it turned out.
also, I understand with the writing thing and the procrastination!!! it’s so hard!!!!
Ugh, yes.
And I’m sure your characters are gonna be fine!
Thanks for the encouragement. So will/are your characters.
what exactly is scaring you? If you don’t mind my asking.
I don’t mind. It’s…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Ok! (It’s just her name)
And like I said, this collage is really incomplete, especially since it doesn’t exactly capture all their culture, but I like it all the same.

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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I haven’t written anything…. *Wince*
But I have been reexamining characters. Which hurts because what I thought I’d figure out before now is still undecided.
I did write the opening for a little WIP I put down a long time ago. It’s a children’s novel about a group of squirrels on their journey to the fabelled country of…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
I made a collage for Alyona, but I don’t know if it’s done or not. I might still share it as is….
….hmmm…..
If I do, should it be the all English one, or the one with Hebrew? (Eishlagair is not Hebrew, but it’s not developed enough to use in a collage… Then of course there’s the keyboard problem. Eishlagair doesn’t use…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 4 months ago
Absolutely!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The-Bad-Guys-With-No-Name Kinda Need A Name (just a little bit) in the forum Characters 3 years, 4 months ago
Ooooo, names! I love names. (Though they can be a pain at times.)
First, do you need a name for an organization/governing body of bad guys or specific people?
Second, what name pool/culture does your country have? For instance, are they kinda English-ish like with names like Winston, Audrey, Henry, Elizabeth, Collin, John,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 4 months ago
I just read through these and they’re awesome! I love these characters and their friendship dynamic.
A little curious about what happens next…
Especially considering the foliage there….
And this really fascinating character development you have going on….
And how you have left us completely in the dark….
And the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 4 months ago
Wait! You’ve read Men of Iron too? I’m so thrilled to hear that! It is so, so good.
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