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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 10 months ago
The book you say? Hmmm. I’ll have to say I haven’t read it, (or watched it, other than a few clips of the play.) but it definitely sounds interesting! All I’ve heard about the book is that it is completely different from the play (or musical, or any of it for that matter. XD)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 10 months ago
Certainly! They’re all good, in my own most humble opinion. (Of course they are, ’cause why would I mention them if they weren’t? XD)
Scout, Riffles for Watie by Harold Keith, and Snow Treasure, are all not exactly classics. I think RfW was written around 1957, ST around 1942, and Scout was sometime in the 50’s-60’s(Not sure). A…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
OoooOooOoo! Thanks for sharing that. I love Q-and-A’s.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Pitch Critique! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ooo! Pitches! I love these things.
- Â You wielded your words with accuracy, letting each strike with full implications. This definitely makes me curious about the story itself.
- The whole thing is imaginative and makes the reader ask some intriguing questions: who died? What is a circus world? What is going to happen? Why are…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh!!!
Riffles for Watie by Harold Keith
A Little Princess by F. B. Burnett
And if these last two count:
Snow Treasure by Marie McSwigan
Scout by somebody-who-I-can’t-remember-but-it’s-a-Dutch-name.
I knew I’d forget some!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 10 months ago
I know, right? XD As long as we stay on the path I don’t mind if we take time to smell the flowers.
I do love the descriptions. Of course after reading them, my own seem very unimaginative.
Oof. That’s a fun question!
The Chronicles of Narnia, and Mere Christianity by C. S. Lewis
Sir Gibbie, The Princess and the Goblin, The Pri…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Thanks!
And yes, but it’s all for their own good, right?
Wow, how awfully specific. XD That sounds interesting though.
Oh but yes! Back stories are some powerful things. The fire happens before the book too, but much of the story will be coming into those places of fear and shining the Light on them (totally acting like I didn’t just…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic How do you draft/write the "first" document? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Drafts? Ugh.
First, may I say that what you’re doing sounds wonderful? You are writing it out!!! Keep it up!!!
(Okay, that sounded weird. Let’s see if I can explain myself.)
If we are talking novels, and not poetry or essays, then:
I think. The I write. Then I think some more. Then I start a timeline but never finish it, etc.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Do you Prefer Classical or Modern Literature? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 10 months ago
Classics. I love them. In fact, most of the more modern fiction that I read is in the same vein and are often called classics. (for example, The Green Ember. 😉 )
Also, I think that having been raised on them, I am not bothered by slower paced books. (Although, if the author jumps down bunny trails that have almost no connection to…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Welcome! 😊
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Definitely a lot of trauma. Enough that although he is only about four at the time, he has some pretty vivid memories.
That makes sense. He will definitely deal with fear of those things, and I think that maybe it’s one more reason he is afraid to help lead in the Retaking; if he associates that horror with “politics”.
Oh,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic I'm giving you permission to rant about your WIP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Hello!
I have suddenly found myself feeling some guilt for the trauma one of my characters is going to deal with.
You see, as a young child he and his siblings are narrowly rescued from a burning city. And yeah, I think he suffers some burns. Nothing too bad, but since children are susceptible to heat, he has some nasty 2nd degree burns.
Then I…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Exactly! XD
Although, I don’t think I’ve ever tried redeeming a villain. Probably because they usually die in the end of the original series.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Wow, thank you for telling us! (I love that clip of Nia, the dear, brave heart.)
It’s good, different, but good. It also has a dangerous tendency to pull you into it’s world and not let you go! XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes, Mr. Brocklehurst is absolutely horrible. I often wish I could shake some sense into a character, but it is very rare that I mentally strangle them. The way he twisted Scripture made me furious, not to mention his other crimes. Ugh!
*Realizes I was screaming*
*Calms down*
Anyway…
As for your question,…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Writer's Corner #505 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I have read/ listened to Jane Eyre. I enjoyed it and thought it was deeply intriguing and surprisingly sweet. Although in full confession, I didn’t really want Jane to marry Rochester. XD
But the end was satisfactory.
Helen is the absolute best! The worst character was that secretary of the school. I despised him.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's Your Favorite Relationship Type in Fiction? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes!! I am attempting to have a sort of adoption story in my Eirtan books, but it’s a bit different, (a subplot) dwelling on the complexities of identity and personal callings.
And wow, that was a mouthful! XD
Exactly! Mentor-appprentice relationships and dark pasts are just… delectable. *Happy moan*
I love those too!…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's Your Favorite Relationship Type in Fiction? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes! Parent-child relationships are definitely one of my absolute favorites. And there’s always something special about adoption.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic What's Your Favorite Relationship Type in Fiction? in the forum Topic of the Week 2 years, 11 months ago
I devour mentor-apprentice relationships, especially when they both need each other, and even more especially when at least one has a painful past.
Then again, siblings are absolutely fantastic. I mean, where else do you get such wonderful loving contention? XD
I also love the friends-who-are-like-siblings-and-would-die-for-each-other. I know it…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Characteristic Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Ach, it’s Braxton and Destiny! Such good characters…such good lines…
Oh, and did I forget Landmar? Not quite, who could?
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