Elishavet Elroi

@godlyfantasy12

Maybe you could start the introduction, and I’ll go from there. But I can do it too, if you’d rather.

@godlyfantasy12

Hahaha-*laugh is suddenly cut short with the realization hits that I practically did the same thing*

I love Esben. I also love that (if I’m not mistaken) Kalmar is shown what Esben looked like before the fall of The Shining Isle.

Anyway, my favorite characters are probably Janner, Leeli, Artham, Kalmar, Esben… Ik, just take…[Read more]

@emilysf

Oh, those are some interesting characters! I think I’ll like Sofia. 😉

Haha, missed yours again. XD but I think they work together, maybe.

Now I’m going to go back and make sure I didn’t miss another.

@godlyfantasy12

Yes, yes, yes!!! That’s perfect.

Ocran (totally needs a dramatic musical score)

Boom, buddoom, doom, doom!

*Nose laugh*

Anywayzees,

Ocran

The noon sun had begun to make it’s way off the height of the heavens and looked in through the high, narrow window. Ocran paused to study the stone work in it’s revealing light.

Finally satisfied, he stepped away and on down the hallway.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly!!! XD

Plus, having Viktor right here, kinda represents how the kingdom of Eirtan is continuing right under his very nose. Bwahahaha!

@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @everyone-else

Crazy idea: what if the castle belongs to Ocran!?

@godlyfantasy12

Ocran

Ocran strode down the length of the corridor, halting before a narrow door.

Walking helped take his mind off the rumors.

Oh, the foolish people! Did they think he didn’t hear their murmurings? Their whispered hopes?

He spat.

They aught to know better, the Eagle had fallen, the Hawk was crippled. The ashes of the heirs…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Or nicer. He’s less two-faced, and only encourages people to betray and warp each other after his great success in the first because the latter failed for him.

If that made sense.

@godlyfantasy12

Wow…she definitely sounds interesting. Let’s give it a try, shall we?

Although, my “villain” is around 30 years of age, and a bit of the Bonifer Squoonish type, just less nice. He’s the military governor of the Dorwain province of Eirtan.

Just that last sentence makes me want to call the eagles.

*Realizes that only makes…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I too feel that I have spoken much on this thread. However, I concur: we need a villain.

My “villains” are a high ranking prince (official, not son of a king) and a couple vague ideas concerning generational curses, addictions, fears, and the father of lies.

I doubt any of the latter would work, but maybe the first may in a…[Read more]

*A soft moan drifts from the court yard*

Kilied, where are you? We neeeeed you!

@r-m-archer

Isn’t it?

They are interesting. So, those particular cultures are mostly concentrated in the VoyageFolk. They dress like the Norse and the Rus, speak like the Rus, and live like the Northmen in that they avoid living on land. At all. (with some of my own invention to blend them all.)

I have found it intriguing to study (ha, ha, that…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Sure! That’s fine with me.

By the way, I’m also considering adding in another character, considering the lack of girls. It’d either be one of Viktor’s sisters (Alyona) or an MC from the other series I’m plotting (Winifrith).

But I might not, we’ll just see.

@godlyfantasy12

Thanks! All the characters on here are great.

Yay! Thank you. They sure are fascinating things, these themes.

@denali-christianson

WORLD BUILDING!!

I’ll try not to rant too much.

I love world building, and the great news is that I have two WIPs with two very different worlds to form. Huzzah!

And I get to use them as excuses to read random articles on the formation of the Baltic/slav tribes, whether the Saxons used slings, and what kind of bread was…[Read more]

@maryg3

Themes are so neat! I love finding little hidden lessons in the books I read.

Now, adding them isn’t always quite so easy, and I know I have a long way to go before my stories properly portray their themes. (I have to write them first, for one… 😉 )

But I agree with the others: multiple themes are fantastic and best when they all work…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

He thinks he’s 13, having but one year before the monumental year of 14, in which he is considered an adult, (although, yes people understand he’s a young adult, and treat him likewise.)

He’s actually 14, but that will only be important later in the book, so yeah, he’d say 13.